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She swims into the night .............Verse

Updated on June 28, 2015

Go willingly my love
step gingerly into the sea and shiver
arms over bare breast's
such an elusive dream
I will stand alone and secretly watch
as you tilt your beauty back and smile
naked to the waist
your thighs as naked as the darkness itself
you stand knee deep in distrust
waist deep in solitude
thigh deep in doubt
and dive in
And you never return as you never came
to me to begin with



Dedicated to all women .

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      whonunuwho 21 months ago from United States

      Poignant and soulful my friend. Nice work, whonu.

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      ahorseback 21 months ago

      Thank you my friend !

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      Eric Dierker 21 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Took too many times to read this as my mind kept fluttering back to exceedingly joy filled moments of my time here on earth. Oh what beauty has been bestowed on us in women and nature. And your poetry brings it all together in lovely design.

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      Nellieanna Hay 21 months ago from TEXAS

      Lovely. Just lovely.

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      ahorseback 21 months ago

      Eric , Yes , That's just what I' was thinking as I wrote .

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      ahorseback 21 months ago

      Thank you kind lady ! ......:-]

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 21 months ago from Southern Illinois

      beautiful and vividly expressed....

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      ahorseback 21 months ago

      Hi Ruby , I appreciate that !

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 21 months ago from Victoria, Australia

      Evocative and lovely.

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      ahorseback 21 months ago

      Blossom , Thank you kind lady !.........:-]

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      CrisSp 20 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Another soulful hub straight from the heart of a soulful writer. What women (and men) will not love such poignant creation!

      Love from the sky to you Ed. ~

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      ahorseback 20 months ago

      Thank you Chris , I recently commented on those awesome writings of yours , you are so kind !......Muuuahhh !

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