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War...

Updated on May 25, 2012

...Rights And Wrongs

War asks...

Wait
And
Riddle

Watching
Aftershocks
Ripping Ragnarok

Shovels High
Lessons Lied
Empty sidewinders
Empty the time lines
Pause for intermission...

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    • epigramman profile image

      epigramman 6 years ago

      .....well words are at your commnand in poetic precision

      and artful manipulation ......

      ...and it makes your reader stop and think!

    • epigramman profile image

      epigramman 6 years ago

      I also like your image of the

      begging skeleton (or is he praying?)

      ....it's very effective and brings closure to your intent

    • bibi16 profile image
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      Bibi 6 years ago from Phoenix Arizona

      Thank you, and a muchas gracias. BB16

    • MFB III profile image

      MFB III 6 years ago from United States

      Bullet riddled

      without a clue

      or a solution,

      waiting in a

      spirited form

      so that they

      can depart,

      as the beast

      of death shops

      Baghdad, Bag-son

      Bag-mother

      slipping spiderlike

      through the aftershocks,

      stirring camoflauge webbing,

      all that remains

      are remains,

      spades turn back

      their new bunks,

      as young boys and

      girls nap forever,

      beneath the stages of war,

      with no intermission.

      ~~~Great write.~~MFB III

    • bibi16 profile image
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      Bibi 6 years ago from Phoenix Arizona

      Attention ticket holders. Please take your seats or you will miss naptime for the remainder of our performance. LOL! BB16

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