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Watching The Raindrops Fall

Updated on November 17, 2010

Looking In Instead Looking Out

The rain covers the window with such precision

Little by little the water has found its way from edge to edge

The small little drops don't seem much

When they start they are more like a sprinkle of jimmies that bearly cover the top

Then as time travels on you see more and more

Before you know it there is not one place left untouched

Life is just like this

We begin as a small child

Life looking so enormous and wild

As we grow the knowledge we know becomes increasingly more

The older we become hopefully the wiser we are

There are times that is not true

We some how some way fall back to the past

We have to repeat lessons that we should of learned

If we are dealing with fire we get burned

When we understand that life is in are very hands

We should see the worlds most precious gifts and share them freely

The world revolves around greed and destruction

For what reasons I am constantly searching

When life is abundant and prosperous

There is no need to worry

No need to hoard

When will there be a balance between the worlds money and its people

To sit and watch someone go without

When we ourselves may have more than enough

How do we accept the challanges that we are faced

With more love and more grace

As the raindrops roll down the window pane

Lets not forget our fellow man and the globe that circles round

For it will not be the end since we are the only animal that will never become extinct


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    • DREAM ON profile image

      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Daydreamer I don't see too much rain so when it comes it is welcome and refreshing.Thanks for reading.

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      daydreamer13 7 years ago

      Good poem!

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Acaetnna Each raindrop goes its own way.They often make a cold and dreary day so special.They give new meaning to the water that our bodies can not live without.Maybe it is a simple reminder how basic life really is.Enjoy the good in everything and you never know what can happen.Thanks for your wonderful wishes.

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      acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

      This is wonderul Dream On. Raindrops are so beautiful as they fall down the window pane. I too love watching them when I am inside in the dry and keeping warm and cosy.I so loved the way you related them to life. You have an amazing ability to capture the moment with your words.

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Carolina Muscle Let the good shine through.Thanks buddy.

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      carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      More love, more grace.. all we need in life.

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Darlene Sabella I too am comforted by the sound and sight of those little fellas.They put me in a lullabye state.I get so relaxed and if I not careful its nighty night.I find it hypnotic and I so easily enter into a dream state.I am not sure why?But I know I feel great and that is a good thing.We have so much in common.Thanks for opening doors and keeping the sky from falling.

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      Darlene Sabella 7 years ago from Hello, my name is Toast and Jam, I live in the forest with my dog named Sam ...

      Oh my dear friend, I could watch the rain drop for ever and ever. They are like snowflakes not looks the same, I love to dream while watching the rain and to listen to the sounds like music to my ears. Love this hub, thumbs up my dear dear friend....

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Joy56 You are very much appreciated and welcome.I roll out the welcome mat and strike up the band.I will try to keep my thoughts as fresh as a morning snow.

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      Joy56 7 years ago

      some thought provoking words there for sure.....