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Waters Of Delight (poem)

Updated on May 2, 2014

She led me to the waters of delight

She led me through a wonder set anew

She led me where enchantment would debut

She led me with a smile I couldn’t fight

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And endless worlds of kisses would ensue

As passion’s rainbow waited for our flight

Was so much more within me to incite

Beyond my feelings realms I never knew

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Her waters flamed consuming endless sea

Mid pleasure even senses couldn’t frame

She led me to where consciousness was gone

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And when I woke was no one there but me

With emptiness no tears on earth could tame

For in the waters part of me was drawn

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      Audrey Hunt 3 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      Ohhhhhh - You are a romantic one. As I read through this poetry, I pretend that these words are spoken to me. sigh. And when you awoke no one was there. How sad that is. Voted awesome and beautiful and sharing.

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      Abba Elijah aka elijagod 3 years ago from Nigeria

      Beautiful poem. You are just incredible Mhatter99

      that is another interesting hub !

      Thanks for sharing !

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      Really cute song and great poem.

      The last two stanzas feel that they are missing something, and yet the rhyme is there. Perhaps you can take from the last and give to the penultimate. Was this how you meant to do it? Or was it this way?

      Her waters flamed consuming endless sea

      Mid pleasure even senses couldn’t frame

      With emptiness no tears on earth could tame

      And when I woke was no one there but me

      She led me to where consciousness was gone

      .......................................................................

      .......................................................................(add two lines)

      For in the waters part of me was drawn

      Loving thoughts.

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India

      Martin , you have penned a very wonderful poem and touched upon the very nerve of pleasure and bliss. Thanks for sharing such a fascinating beauty with us. voted up.

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      Cynthia B Turner 3 years ago from Georgia

      Beautiful poem. Everything is lovely and passion rules in the dream state. Some dreams we want to go on and when we do wake up it may seems as if reality is a pale shadow of the dream.

      Loved your expression.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Beautiful poetry as always, Mh!

      Blessings always

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      Karen Silverman 3 years ago

      ummmm...wet dream?

      (lol)

      Hey...someone had to say it!

      HUGS&sharingxx

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Beautiful! I just don't know how you do it!

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      Victor W. Kwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

      Amazingly beautiful, Martin! And thumbs up on the picture of the Siren from that Doctor Who episode!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Very expressive.

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