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We Have All Felt This Lover’s Pain (limerick)

Updated on July 27, 2012

This lover his poor heart does ache

Again he had made this mistake

So in pain he sat

When will he learn that

Don’t eat all that fat on that steak


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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Love the twists at the end....very funny....and I've been there done that.

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      Dana Strang 4 years ago from Ohio

      Good one! What seems to be one thing becomes another! I really do love a good twist.

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      That was unique and I was not expecting him to have an indigestion.

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Geee... what an ending! Right when I was getting into it! lol

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      Midnight Lights 4 years ago from USA

      Hahaha! that was funny. Thank you for the laugh. But, yes so true, don't partake of all that fat on that steak as it could lead to some horrible heartburn, maybe even a heart attack... and we wouldn't want that. :/

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Mhatter99,

      Clever ending, impressive!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hahahaha!! lol! this is the best mhatter!

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      Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      LOL...this is too funny!!! Love the twist at the end!!!

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      b. Malin 4 years ago

      How true, how true...And we NEVER learn. Thanks for sharing this Fun, telltale Poem!

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      That'll sure do it!

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      Dexter Yarbrough 4 years ago from United States

      Funny stuff!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Funny Mhatter...

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      lol If cooked right a little fat on steak isn't all that bad.

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      myownlife 4 years ago from london

      short and sweet.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      LOL He'll never learn

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      Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

      Another good one! Voted up.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      LOl.. so funny my friend.. You are too much..

      Debbie

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