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What Just Happened?

Updated on June 30, 2016

My life will never be the same since she said those three words to me.

Who could blame me for running out?

How am I supposed to react to this?

I need to time to gather my thoughts.To think of what to say.

She looks so beautiful tonight. Why couldn’t she just keep it to herself for a while so we could enjoy our evening together?

My cell phone is ringing. I pull it out of my pocket; it’s her. She must have finished changing her outfit and realized I’m gone.


(c) 2014 Brenda Thornlow

Brenda Thornlow was voted one of the 50 Great Writers You Should Be Reading for 2015. She is the author of the new fiction series My Life as I Knew It; The Revolving Door; A Godless Love and her memoir, My Short-Lived Life at Being Perfect. Available at Amazon. (Link below)

© 2014 Brenda Thornlow

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      Suzanne Day 3 years ago from Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

      You capture the moment well. Voted interesting.

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      Brenda Thornlow 3 years ago from New York

      Thank you! :)

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      Terry Harman 3 years ago from Lacey Washington

      You always write with a passion! Good job!

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      Brenda Thornlow 3 years ago from New York

      Thank you so much, THarman7! :)

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Uh oh! lol! What a kicker. Perhaps he needs time out to ascertain whether or not she's yanking his chain or really means business.

      An exciting, momentous entry of ' force majour' or untold future happiness in the making captured well.

      Take it easy,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      ' majeure '

      R.Q.

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      Brenda Thornlow 3 years ago from New York

      Thank you, Romeos! Hope all is well!

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      dashingscorpio 3 years ago

      Let me guess, she said: "Hold my purse." LOL!

      Seriously I really enjoyed reading this hub. By leaving out (the three words) it opens things up for interpretation for each reader. Did she say;

      "I love you", "Lets get married", "I am pregnant", "I need space", "I have diarrhea", "I'm a man", "Lets live together".... The possibilities are endless!

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      Brenda Thornlow 3 years ago from New York

      Hahaha...thank you, dashingscorpio! Another possibility is "I am gay!" So glad you enjoyed it!:)

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Captivating story !

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      Brenda Thornlow 3 years ago from New York

      Thank you, James!

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      I love "Journal" too.It is so touching!

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      Brenda Thornlow 3 years ago from New York

      So glad you like The Journal too, James! I actually got a little choked up after writing that one.

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      Brenda Thornlow 3 years ago from New York

      **His Journal**

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