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What You Did to Me That Night

Updated on February 24, 2014
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What can you do

To make me fall in love with you?

What can you say

To make me feel that way?


What can you hope to spark

To truly hit that mark?

Is it the things you do to me

Tonight?


Peach colored roses,

Dark Lindt chocolate imposes

A song of promises of love

A setting on a mountain from above?


I pick you up and carry you away

These aren’t just words simply meant to say

How I really feel so deep inside

Yet, only you can decide.


What can you hope to spark

To truly hit that mark?

Was it the things you did to me

Last night?


We moved those mountains

And the rolling seas

We created thunder

And a warming breeze.


The mood was set and undeniable

And now you’re pliable

And you’ll be mine tonight

(Tonight, and every night)


Love is a sentinel

Making you sentimental,

And what is the crux

Going to be for us?


What did you hope to spark

To help you hit that mark?

Was it what you hoped to do to me

Every night?

© 2014 Deb Hirt

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    • aviannovice profile imageAUTHOR

      Deb Hirt 

      3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Sounds like a wonderful way to start a hobby, Acho.

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      Acho 

      3 years ago

      Yes and no. My oldest doesn't event thuogh I wish she would! My 12 year old plays football and my 4 year old takes 2 different dance classes. My 2 year old will start dance in January.

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      Deb Hirt 

      3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      I can see why, Abhijit. You'll no doubt find out something new!

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      Abhijit 

      3 years ago

      Not yet, my 5 year old just started Kindergarten & they don't allow them to start any extra-curricular acietvtiis until 1st grade. Can't wait though!

    • aviannovice profile imageAUTHOR

      Deb Hirt 

      3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Glad to hear it, Howard. A healthy body equates a healthy mind. We can never start our regimen too young.

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      Howard 

      3 years ago

      Yes and no. My oldest doesn't event tghuoh I wish she would! My 12 year old plays football and my 4 year old takes 2 different dance classes. My 2 year old will start dance in January.

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      Rizwana Yasmin 

      4 years ago from Lahore

      and ! take me with you in that journey...I am serious ...xx

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      Rizwana Yasmin 

      4 years ago from Lahore

      I know and you are on the way...Love you Deb xx

    • aviannovice profile imageAUTHOR

      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      I do have a great life, Riz, and a great hobby with my camera. Perhaps it will turn into a real job one day.

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      Rizwana Yasmin 

      4 years ago from Lahore

      master in all pieces , i must say to you Deb, you deserve great life with your beautiful expressions ..... love xx Riz

    • aviannovice profile imageAUTHOR

      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      manatita, I must say it when it enters my head or it will disappear like the fog just above the ground. Thanks for reading.

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      manatita44 

      4 years ago from london

      What can I say? Debs.

      I did not think of you in this Light. Were you hiding something? (smile)

      Awesome poetry! Joy and peace.

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      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Kawika, I like your description!

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      Kawika Chann 

      4 years ago from Northwest, Hawaii, Anykine place

      Nicely done Deb - thanks for the verbal romp in the hay... I'll go try it on my wife now... Peace. Kawi.

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      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Yeah, Perspy!

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      Demas W Jasper 

      4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Just imagine, and this makes it possible, a loved one whispering that in your ear!

    • aviannovice profile imageAUTHOR

      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Hey, teaches! Glad that you liked this one, too.

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      Dianna Mendez 

      4 years ago

      Another wonderful side of your many talents! Nicely written.

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      The Examiner-1 

      4 years ago

      You are welcome. I did not know if I was wrong, since it was poetry, but I did not recognize the word.

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      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thanks, passionate77. These things tend to strike at any time, so I have to do my best to be around something to record them.

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      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thanks, Alicia!

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      passionate77 

      4 years ago

      wow, so lovely and romantic, really enjoyed the read, wonderful expression in an extremely delicate yet strong way that leaves a deep impact on the reader and the reader feels going through all these emotion him/herself. nice sharing dear!

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      Linda Crampton 

      4 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      This is interesting and very romantic poetry, Deb!

    • aviannovice profile imageAUTHOR

      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      I found the missing letter yesterday, thanks.

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      The Examiner-1 

      4 years ago

      The letter "l".

      Kevin

    • aviannovice profile imageAUTHOR

      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Things that make you go hmmmmmm….

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      Michelle Liew 

      4 years ago from Singapore

      An eternal question...we do wonder, don't we?

    • aviannovice profile imageAUTHOR

      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Leslie, I'm just FULL of surprises.

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      Karen Silverman 

      4 years ago

      And now for something completely different! This is just a lovely, deeply moving poem. Very sweet!

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      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thanks, Billy. I am just doing my thing, and out it comes...

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      Bill Holland 

      4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Love it...very well-written, Deb. You know how much I love your poetry; keep it coming.

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      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thanks, Faith Reaper….I really appreciate your kind words. No telling what I might come up with next(grin).

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      Faith Reaper 

      4 years ago from southern USA

      My goodness, Deb, this is brilliant and beautiful and passionate!!! I am really loving your poetry. Each one you publish, I think I love more than the other, but not really, as they are all superb!

      Up and more and sharing.

      Blessings,

      Faith Reaper

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      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      No, manatita..I only do this when it strikes upon occasion, though this has been a formidable week on runs of verse.

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      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      What letter, Kevin?

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      manatita44 

      4 years ago from london

      Looks like I'll have to watch my back from now on. You're almost ahead! have you been doing this for a while?

      Excellent poetry. I commend you highly.

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      The Examiner-1 

      4 years ago

      The feeling of love between a man and a woman. How awesome were your words Deb. Great job - (except for one thing, I think you missed a letter).

      Kevin

    • aviannovice profile imageAUTHOR

      Deb Hirt 

      4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thanks, Jackie. Maybe it will be a song, like I am hoping for...

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      Jackie Lynnley 

      4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      This is so beautiful. I miss doing poetry. Well I will just come read yours, keep up the good work.

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