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What is Lifeee

Updated on July 1, 2013

What is Life

Life is like a doritos locos taco

Crunchy Crispy Tasty Meaty depending on your taste buds

add a beer or two on the side for some great fun

slap a hinny I mean your knee as your steadily laughing

stop the talking start the eating there is way too much blabbing

now lets break down what a taco really is and how it connects to life:

Meat: meaty meat oh meat my dear what are you really

your the core your the center you are the family

you hold the taco together when it wants to break apart

you are there to the end even when the chewing is ready to start

Lettuce: Lettuce lettuce crunchy leafy veggie oh how i like thee

your the blanket that covers the meat which is the family

your like a home a shelter of course where everybody stays

come home from work or school to a bed where you can lay

Cheese: Cheesy cheese I need more please to support the meat

the taste no waste just here to please I want more on my plate

as in support i mean money of course that is what cheese shall be

so many bills in stacks they fill to support the family

Tomatoes: tomatoh tomaatoh whichever the pronounciation

we are almost to the end of how these two have relation

as in these two i mean the taco and life

please keep up dear no more time for laziness or strife

now pay close attention because the tomatoes are activities

clothes furniture personal hygiene the list never seems to end

thats why we need the cheddar cheese to support and to lend

Sour Cream: (optional) sour cream your optional no one seems to like

your like a garnish that no one wants to bite

if i were to pick something for you to be

it would be have to be work steadily avoiding the jerk while doing extra tasks for free

The Family(Meat) is at the bottom it needs the shelter(lettuce) which needs the cheese

(money) to remain, where the tomatoes (activities) come in and the sour cream

is work which really isn't optional even when we are dealing with a jerk (boss).


P.S. The taco shell the taco shell she must of forgot no the taco shell is the government which controls everything even our thoughts ! :D



Life is like a doritos locos taco.


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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @DDE thanks for commenting im glad you enjoyed my hub.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      What is Lifeee very nicely approached and I enjoyed reading this hub.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @ignugent17 thanks for reading my poem and im glad you liked it!

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @jenslibra im glad you liked my poem! Thanks for stopping by

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      Jennifer Vasquez 4 years ago from Long Beach, CA

      Love the poem! Put a smile on my face, but it also made me think. Life is multilayered.

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      ignugent17 4 years ago

      Interesting poem! :-)

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @MarieCoester haha you never know maybe it is maybe it isnt. And thats not fair that you dont get to taste the awesomeness of a doritos locos taco.

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      Martie Coetser 4 years ago from South Africa

      I agree! Life is about like a doritos locos taco. Though we don't have that down here! Or maybe it is time for me to find a Mexican restaurant?

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @PeggyW im glad you liked my hub

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @SueBailey thanks for commenting and im glad you liked my hub.

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      Susan Bailey 4 years ago from South Yorkshire, UK

      I can't get a song out of my head now. 10CC's Life is a Minestrone! Interesting and amusing thanks.

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      Peggy Woods 4 years ago from Houston, Texas

      For me it would have to be the lasagna. Life is a layering of experiences. Interesting hub. Up and funny votes.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @IndianChef thanks for the positive feedback

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      Indian Chef 4 years ago from New Delhi India

      It looks very yummy and mouth watering. Voting it up.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @Prasetio30 Thanks for liking my hub. Your words are very kind and much appreciated!

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      prasetio30 4 years ago from malang-indonesia

      It sound delicious, my friend. You make my hungry!!! Thanks for writing and sharing with us. Voted up :-)

      Prasetio

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @AudreyHowitt I'm glad you found my work clever and thanks for commenting !

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Clever piece--I bet this would sound great aloud--

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @aviannovice thanks for the positive feedback and for liking my hub.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      I adore your take on life, and your true passion is in the depths of your soul. Rock on!

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @b.Malin thanks for your words. Im glad you liked my hub and that you are interested in following more in the future. Thanks for voting up.

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      b. Malin 4 years ago

      A Clever Poem Torrilynn, a Fun read, very Entertaining indeed!

      I now look forward to Following your Hubs...And a Vote UP to You as well!

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @janetwrites haha yeah thanks for the positive feedback and im glad you liked my hub

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      Janet Giessl 4 years ago from Georgia country

      Such a creative and entertaining hub. I can't decide whether to compare life to a taco or lasagna.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @Gypsy Im glad that you liked my hub and I see everyone as comparing life to lasagna lately. There must be something in the water. haha. and thanks for voting up !

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and interesting. I applaud your creative mind. Understood it all but it did get me hungry. I compare life to lasagna but tacos are OK too.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @cleaner3 i absolutely agree with you but its just so cheesy haha. thanks for commenting!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      delicious, thick and meaty but with so much flavor at times it can be overwhelming.. Lasagna of course.!

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @Deborah haha thats awesome and im glad you liked my hub. thanks for commenting.

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      Deborah Neyens 4 years ago from Iowa

      Cute and clever! I would compare life to lasagna. All of those different layers and flavors, you see.