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Poem | What is there in your eyes?

Updated on April 30, 2011

Is it a star in the darkest sky?

Won’t I reach there, if I try?

Is it as deep as the deepest sea?

Will it be able to shelter me?

Sometimes I think it’s a pond

Of water loosely bond

Which come out now and then,

In a joy or a slightest pain.

Twinkle twinkle blinking eyes,

I can’t control heart beat rise,

When you look through cornered eye,

My heart stops I won’t lie!

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    • I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      Eyes say so much, don't they? I would agree, in love ones eyes can make your heart race and melt simultaneously. nice poem

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      cupid51 7 years ago from INDIA

      Many thanks to you Invictus (Can't you shorten your id? ). Thanks for the encouragement you have given.

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      shorten my id? call me whatever you like so long as it's nice! :D

      Have a nice day!

      ps. What is the weather like in India, in January? Is it warm or cold?

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      cupid51 7 years ago from INDIA

      Thank you very much. January is the coldest time for India. But as you know India is a very large country and there are varieties of places are there.Coastal areas are comparatively warmer.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      cupids arrow is spot on here.... lovely

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      cupid51 7 years ago from INDIA

      Thanks poetlorraine for your beautiful comment.

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      Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

      ow,eyes..the things that kill me.

      lovely poem, cupid! keep writing :)

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      cupid51 7 years ago from INDIA

      Thanks blaise for the beautiful words you have used to encourage me! I will certainly keep writing!

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      aefrancisco 7 years ago from somewhere down the road

      its a wonderful poem .... i won't get tired reading it (again and again and again)

      more please :)

      thanks in advance. . .

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      cupid51 7 years ago from INDIA

      Thanks from the bottom of my heart for your beautifully garnished appreciation.

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      2uesday 7 years ago

      Lovely to read this, thank you for sharing.

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      cupid51 7 years ago from INDIA

      Thank you uesday for visiting my hub. I am happy that you loved that one.

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      blackreign2012 6 years ago

      I totally like it ~hugs~ Great poem

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      cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA

      Thanks blackreign for the lovely comment!

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