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Updated on May 13, 2011

Call me crazy

Call me insane

I see you’re lazy

I see your vain

Call me anything

Your heart beholds

I see the samething

You are old

Where do I start

Where do you finish

Right from the heart

Will you diminish?

If I May

If you must

Let me say

Let you fuss

I am grand

You are weak

I will stand

You just seek

See the difference

Read the signs

Have you any sense

I draw my lines


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    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Johnny, I always love hearing from you and your mind. Your words are always so beautiful and I can almost touch and caress your words!! Thanks as always...

      Eid, Sharing is caring they say thank you dear friend.

      Samia, Thank you a lil different I guess I go with what mood I am in.

      Tnder, A brave heart indeed oh how I love a bravo from you!!

      DEnise, Isnt Johnny (jadedlove) great his words are so filling... Thank you!!

      B., Lines are always there but not visible I drew mine with a thick black 5point sharpie marker lol he he!

      Shana, Thank you, thank you very much in Elvis's Voice ha ha!!

      smiles all :)


    • shanaya profile image


      7 years ago from Living in my Own Dreams:)

      Dear Bella! Worth reading poem as always.:)


    • b. Malin profile image

      b. Malin 

      7 years ago

      Good one Bella, "I draw my Lines" certainly sums up this Creative and Strong Poem.

    • Denise Handlon profile image

      Denise Handlon 

      7 years ago from North Carolina

      Interesting, with attitude. Wonderful job. I also enjoyed reading JadedLove's reply, LOL

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      7 years ago

      Spoken like the "brave heart" you are! Bravo!

    • samiaali profile image


      7 years ago

      I loved this one bellawritter23! Well done! :)

    • Eiddwen profile image


      7 years ago from Wales

      Brilliant Bella, and I vote this one up all the way.

      Thank you for sharing and here's to many more hubs to share.

      Take care


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      7 years ago

      Let me know

      who I am.

      No need for me,

      to make things end.

      Hit me harder

      let me see.

      Kill my will

      just set me free.

      Let go of hate

      find me in death.

      Have what you want

      there isn't much left.

      A tear may be found

      under my eyes.

      you had the last word

      goodbye goodbye....

      Sorry Bella, i couldnt resist. I truly love the sense of anger and fear within. I find your words lovely. up and awesome.

      Johnny Love

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Cracknutcase, Lol thank you very much you are too kind honestly.

      smiles :)


    • Cracknutcase profile image


      7 years ago from India,bangalore

      W-o-W!!!! You have a way with words and anyone can see how talented you simply are, Bella!

      Thanks for sharing it with us..

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Thanks guys I just felt like I needed a lift and this did it!

      smiles :)


    • mckbirdbks profile image


      7 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      I could hear the door slamming. Bella you have done it again.

    • bbnix profile image


      7 years ago from Southern California

      oooh rock. Our lives are such a roller coaster!

      e-ticket all the way...

      Where is that line by the way, so I can stay the hell away from it...


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