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Poem:What's your take on this? video..

Updated on March 15, 2012

What’s your take?

As individuals

if we are not

already using our

own awareness

If your mind is

not already working

The graveyard shift

While racking up

An insurmountable

Amount of overtime


The fact that some

part of our existence

Is most definitely
an open question

That is somewhat

incredibly strange!

I am one who does

actually believe

that we were all

already in some way

shape or form


Either living or dead

But at this point

the reality of us

being so much alive

actually prevents us

from seeing any truth

in that reality.

That’s actually fine

because after all

to be alive now

only signifies that

We were in a some

dormant state

A state which is

also know as

not being alive.

Can I say dead?
Yes I can,

But are you with me?

Think about it

Can you at least see

some minuscule possibility?

that maybe we

were always alive!

But only in some

different form!

Are you with me?

There is no one but

The Most High God

who really knows!

Now can anyone truly

be able to stay

Which was here first

Between the Chicken

and it's possible

original source

the Egg!

Is it the chicken?

O is it the egg

Think carefully of

what it takes to

have either one

in existence!

Scientist nowadays

can do amazing things

Look at the

amazing things

that some are saying

were done by themselves

Does it really take

an egg or another chicken

To first lay that egg?

What's your take?

Who among us

can truly say

If it was first life

then to death

Or if it was death

Then to life.

Strange reasoning


But you should

give it a go!

Where could God

Or time have possibly

come from?

But he said that I Am!

That's if you believe
something was first
But if you are believing


Was there before

something was and

The something came

From nothing!

I know am not mad

Regardless of what

I truly believe!

The night and the day

of it all!

May still be fighting

for the right to be

the one who gets

Credited and crowned

With being here first.
There are no witnesses!
Only the Most High God!,

even what you might

believe to be god..

Excuse me I must write

your own in common letters

for I am speaking about

The one and only

The Most High God!

Can you imagine that

the night was there first

and he somehow knew

that he will some day

Need a sun

To produce some light

Or was it the opposite?

The light was there first

then he decided that

he will need some


Maybe the master

of the light

Will be the one

Holding the right

to reign supreme

as to the exclusivity

of it all.

What can anyone say!

Maybe the two were

always interlocked

from the onset of time.

They can never

be separated.

Only appearing

To be at odds now

But have already

Victoriously serenaded

an ordained by the

powers that be!

The bear the crown

As life's perfectly

conjoined twins!

God and the time

he created knowing

that it would be

The Most vital FOR MANKIND!

What’s your take?


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    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks rasta , bless.

      I has no other place to go it's a true circle in this life , not the one that could be corrupted the inevitable and eminent one, can't be changed, can't be broken or nmegotiated, for whe the right time come, every knee shall bow and ever tongue confess the Highest. I will nevr forget that part in you Quantum , when you literally said that who you are referring to is the God of God , the highest of the Most High.

      Yes me Brethren you have the light. I just took back the fire.

      I pondered for a few days and I took the blessings , because there it is in everything even death. And I can handle it, I have truly prepared ,this one won't cry.

      Thanks brethren for reading and those always welcome comments.

      Bless up.

      A mail under way.

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      Marvin Parke 6 years ago from Jamaica

      The light shine in through the darkness. And the darkness understood it not. The sad part is there is a lot I don't understand. Trying to let go the ego to get more sunshine. Everything will reveal in time.

      The video not working.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      You are one of a kind I knew this as soon as I read the hub I knew . You see in being sincere and honest , self becomes secondary, the absolute concentration on sharing even the simplest that you have , is seen as the way to go, and the truth is it is!

      So I thank you for sharing that beautiful sincere piece. That's what is done by the truthful ones.

      Thank you for reading and leaving such a great and sincere comment.

      Give thanks , and keep up your great work , I will be reading.

      Have a blessed day!

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      Donaisabella 6 years ago from Fort Myers

      Some complex reasoning and a wonderful ability to put it in writing. I would have probably confused everyone trying to put such thoughts together. It is a question worth asking and simply for me, we have always existed in one form or another since the beginning of time. At first we were a part of the God who conceptualized us, then we have been passed on from generation to generation as cells. Look at this scripture. It talks about tithe but there is something profound that the writer says about Levi. 9 One might even say that Levi, who collects the tenth, paid the tenth through Abraham, 10 because when Melchizedek met Abraham, Levi was still in the body of his ancestor.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      You know you are a very wise one lol. But mine is quite simple , yet extremely difficult for me to put any further

      than believing along with the Bible and Jesus as the main sources of knowledge.

      No need to go any more , God is there beyond the shadow of any doubt.

      Just look in the mirror.

      Thanks for reading "AE" and your thoughtful comment.


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      Ruby Jean Richert 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Many people do not believe in God, that's difficult for me to believe, look around, where did all this come from? The big BANG? Where did the bang come from? Where did humans come from? Someone had to make a man and a woman. I want to believe in reincarnation. I'm reading Edgar Cayce's books, he was a believer. Most religions around the world believe in reincarnation..What do you believe Sky? This is great..Thank you..

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      How can you not see the bigger picture . Don't get us started up in here!

      The truth is Cardisa they can and the did , but the forces of evil is quite powerful.

      But every knee shall bow and every tongue will confess in one way or another . Remember the first name they always call.!

      The Most High God. Every time!

      One of your best comments yet , I feel you!

      Give Thanks.

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      Carolee Samuda 6 years ago from Jamaica

      This wonderful and very thought provoking. Many people don't believe in a higher being and that is so sad. How can you not believe in God when there is good and evil? How can you not believe in God when you look in the mirror? How can you not believe in God when you look at nature?

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      He has my Oscar and that's my life. This was mainly to get someone thinking , to point them in a thoughtful direction. One that I have seen so many humans like myself ,only utilize when they need something from that same thought.

      I thank you sincerely "ROSE" for you so so kind words and a keen positive understanding, because I always await the question from anyone , who do not.

      I am not trying to be perfect or politically correct here but sharing helpful thoughts.

      I am delighted that you understand and like it because that's what matters most!

      Till we write again, may the Most High bless and keep you safe and well Rose!


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. This world would certainly be a much sadder place if we did not have our faith and who is to say that there would be a world if it were not for the Lord. Let's be modern. In our modern world the Lord is the one who has created the biggest masterpiece the world and all of us. He is the best director around and Hollywood owes Him one huge Oscar. God Bless.