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When He Walks Into a Room Poem

Updated on April 16, 2012

This is a picture of my fiance'e Eric with me.

This poem is about how I feel about him.


When he walks into a room poem.

When he walks into a room. Her life begins and she just falls in love with him all over again. He just makes her heart so over filled with love.. It's as though she can't breathe . She pinches her self to make sure shes still alive, or is this just a dream.

All she has to do is just think of him and she begins to explode. Their love is just that powerful. The love they share between them. A love for all ages and a test of time. His tall frame covers her tiny frame. It is as though she were inside of him. Inside of him what a beautiful place that would be. Then she could always be with him.

This would be a safe haven for her. She would never have to be away from him again. She is addicted to him. A drug she wishes no cure for. The drug of her unfailing love for him. The man of her dreams has became her reality. The most powerful man she has ever known. When he goes away her heart just breaks. When he returns its's as though he were never away.

They greet each other with just their eyes and the other one knows each others needs. The need to make passionate love to each other. Every time is like the very first time that they made love. When the earth just stood still. The earth just stood still for that moment in time. For nothing else mattered but him and her, and their entwined bodies together. Would he always be there for her? She hoped so and she would always be there for him.

She had given him her whole heart and soul. Her life was nothing with out him. She would only exist if he were gone. She lived only for him. Her life revolved around his. Her thoughts became his. When she speaks he knows what she is going to say. She doesn't even have to speak with her lips, she speaks with her eyes. He knows her needs before she does and he has become a part of her soul.

The soul she now shares with him. If she doesn't wish to speak he knows her body language. The language of love and they make love as if they are wild, untamed animals. Animals that the world has never known. Wild, untamed, and passionate beasts and he scoops her up in his arms as if he were Tarzan king of the jungle.

He takes her down the hall to their bedroom where he gently unclothes her and ravishes her naked body. When she undresses him, she thinks shes looking at a work of art. A tall and handsome man he is. Her man. The man of her dreams and the only man she ever wishes to know. Her statue of perfection.

By Rhonda G Waits 11/26/10

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    HayleyFarrington 6 years ago

    Beautiful. You are such an amazing writer.

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    rgwem@yahoo.com 6 years ago

    beautiful

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    anonymous 6 years ago

    i love your writing

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    carrie450 6 years ago from Winnipeg, Canada

    Beautifully written Rhonda. Rated up

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    prasetio30 6 years ago from malang-indonesia

    You made this so beautiful. I am glad to see your passion in writing and I love your style. ~prasetio

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    Teresa Schultz 6 years ago from East London, in South Africa

    Great writing. Creative. You make people feel right along with you. Excellent title - again!

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    carlmikael 6 years ago from Sweden

    This was incredible Rhonda, amazingly written!

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    anonymous 6 years ago

    Hes a lucky guy

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    anonymous 6 years ago

    Wow this just so amazing. You are a great writer.

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    Joy Dans 6 years ago

    Beautiful just so beautiful. You are amazing.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thank you Joy for your comment.

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    Elizabeth Jernigan 6 years ago

    Wowjust beautiful. You are such and amazing writer I wish I had your talent.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thank you Elizabeth for your comment and compliment. Thanks for stopping by my hubs.

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    Anonymous 6 years ago

    Beautiful just beautiful.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thank you anonymous for your comment.

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    Gail Minor 6 years ago

    I look at my husband differently now. I look at him in love now. Thank you.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thank you Gail for your comment. I wish you and your husband a happy long life together. Merry Christmas.

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    Rachel Adams 6 years ago

    Wow just beautiful Rhonda just beautiful. Thanks for writing this poem.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thank you for your comment Rachel. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for stopping by my hubs.

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    Linda Franks 6 years ago

    Voted up. Beautifully written Rhonda.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thank you Linda Franks for your beautiful comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Please come back anytime.

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    Truckstop Sally 6 years ago

    Thanks for the beautiful story. I will soon be facing this dream. We'll see how it plays out!!

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks Truckstop Sally thanks for your delightful compliment. Yes. Please let me know how it plays out. Good luck to you.

    HAPPY NEW YEAR

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    stars439 6 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

    Wonderful writing. God Bless You

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks stars439 for your delightful comment. God bless you as well. May your 2011 be filled, with health, wealth, and happiness.

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    GlstngRosePetals 6 years ago from Wouldn't You Like To Know

    Beautiful article. I think your a wonderful writer.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks GlistngRosePetals for your wonderful comment. I am inspired by your beautiful words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

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    Tina Ann 6 years ago

    A beautiful poetic poem Rhonda.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thank you Tina Ann for your delightful comment.

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    honda 5 years ago

    nice

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    Rhonda Musch 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Honda thanks for your nice comment.

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