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Poem | When I was lost

Updated on April 30, 2011

Once in my childhood

I was lost in the dark,

I tried and then cried,

And my Mom saved me.


Once when I was a teen

And lost in the woods,

I tried and then cried,

And my Father saved me.


Once when I was young

And I lost in the Web,

I didn’t try or cry,

But my teacher saved me.


Now when I am grown up

And lost in your eyes,

I won’t try or cry,

Who will save me?

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    • cupid51 profile imageAUTHOR

      cupid51 

      8 years ago from INDIA

      thanks ladyjane fir your appreciation!

    • ladyjane1 profile image

      ladyjane1 

      8 years ago from Texas

      great poem. Cheers.

    • cupid51 profile imageAUTHOR

      cupid51 

      8 years ago from INDIA

      Hi deepanjana, thank you for your comment!

    • deepanjana profile image

      deepanjana 

      8 years ago

      This is such a nice read.. You are a romantic indeed

    • cupid51 profile imageAUTHOR

      cupid51 

      8 years ago from INDIA

      Thanks for your encouraging comment!

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      chakranir 

      8 years ago from KOLKATA, INDIA

      You have really surprised me. Thankfully it is a pleasant surprise. Finally you have come down from the pages of books and tried yourself. a superb beginning. all my good wishes to you.Though I received your mail some days ago, I did not find time to explore your achievement.

      Today, I have registered and created a page. Please go through and comment.

    • cupid51 profile imageAUTHOR

      cupid51 

      8 years ago from INDIA

      Thank you sophs,for the encouraging comment. You are also a nice poet!

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      sophs 

      8 years ago

      So simple but so meaningful, love it! :)

    • cupid51 profile imageAUTHOR

      cupid51 

      8 years ago from INDIA

      Thank you Moulik for visiting my hub again! You are also a fantastic poet! I have read a few of them and will continue to read more. Thanks for the comment.

    • Moulik Mistry profile image

      Moulik Mistry 

      8 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      Very simply expressed - I loved the quiet flow of words...

    • cupid51 profile imageAUTHOR

      cupid51 

      8 years ago from INDIA

      Thank you poetlorraine for the admiration. I have really been encouraged by the comments you people are making on my hubs. Thanks again.

    • cupid51 profile imageAUTHOR

      cupid51 

      8 years ago from INDIA

      Thanks you GadDragon, for visiting my Hub and for the beautiful comment.

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      poetlorraine 

      8 years ago

      aw maybe you will just have to look after yourself, nice poem

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      GadDragon 

      8 years ago from Ahwahnee, CA

      Impressive, my friend. I love this poem.

    • cupid51 profile imageAUTHOR

      cupid51 

      8 years ago from INDIA

      Thank you bojanglesk8, for the inspiring comment and visiting my hub.

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      bojanglesk8 

      8 years ago

      Great poem.

    • cupid51 profile imageAUTHOR

      cupid51 

      8 years ago from INDIA

      Thanks Moulik for visiting my hub. And thanks for the appreciation also.

    • Moulik Mistry profile image

      Moulik Mistry 

      8 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      Very well written poetry, loved it...

    • cupid51 profile imageAUTHOR

      cupid51 

      8 years ago from INDIA

      Thank you very much Blaise for your encouraging comment.

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      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      Loved the flow..simple yet striking.. Thumbs up! :)

    • cupid51 profile imageAUTHOR

      cupid51 

      8 years ago from INDIA

      Many thanks for valuable and encouraging guidance. I will follow that.

    • I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 

      8 years ago

      Hmm..It is always a mystery with ratings fluctuating. Some things to keep in mind...

      1) That your content is original and not duplicate

      2) It just happens here in Hp difficult to explain.

      3)Consistantly writing (which you have done helps)

      4) Note that some 'followers' live up to the term in a stalkerish means. Hope that does not scare you.. It is fun to hub with friends and such.. Though, I have experienced some in shadows, too. (my tip would be to ignore them, and carry on, hopefully in time they get help for themselves) :)

      Good luck with your hubbing.

    • cupid51 profile imageAUTHOR

      cupid51 

      8 years ago from INDIA

      Thank you very much Invictus, I was just looking at my rating and getting a little bit worried seeing that it is decreasing, then your encouraging words came to me. Thanks a lot.

    • I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 

      8 years ago

      Yeah, that's question in this poem. Made my heart jump. Nice flowing poem, Cupid. sounds romantic.

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