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When Jesus Came Knocking

Updated on January 11, 2012

Having fun with myself

I wanted to do something different, so I wrote a parody of my own poem. I'm hispanic and catholic and very old school. Thats enough information about me. Enjoy.

Yo man, I wasn't scared at all

when jesus knocked upon my door.

I opened it and jesus said

" What! no carpet on the floor"

Hey Vato, what you want I said,

Why you knocking on my door.

At first I thought you were the cops

As I pulled out my fourty four.

Cool it man, he said

I'm looking for some dude

put away your Quete

and don't be so G...dam rude.

Want to buy some stuff, I said

it's not stolen, I swear.

It's classier and better

than the clothes you wear.

He said, no dude, I'm not interested

I'm just looking for Time.

He's thinks it's funny going around

scaring people out of their mind.


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    • cleaner3 profile image

      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      sparrow , thank you for the comment.

      glad to see you here

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      rdsparrowriter 5 years ago

      It's so right though cute and funny :)

    • michememe profile image

      Miche Wro 5 years ago

      Ha! Likely likey. Very entertaining.

    • cleaner3 profile image

      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Anaya, thank you , I have missed you . you must drop me an e-mail.

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      Anaya M. Baker 6 years ago from North Carolina

      I like it! Even though you wrote it as a parody, I still thought it was really good in its own right. You have a unique voice.

    • cleaner3 profile image

      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you, Nikkij504gurl

      Your man has a talent for writing

      Or is it just that you bring that out in the men you touch with your words. His Candle poem was awesomme....

      It must be you.

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      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      voted up interesting and funny :)

      All Jesus asks for is Time. Lets make time for God. You never know when he will come a knocking.