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When Night Falls

Updated on June 28, 2012

Raining Chocolate

The day we see is so wonderful and bright

We try do so many things in the light

It is only when the day has reached its peak

The rich darkness covers everything we see from end to end

We are so excited to see the sky of blue

Holding up the sun for me and you

Even hundred mile winds can't change a thing

Every person in the world is affected by the overwhelming sunshine

Until that special hour when a change does take place

Nobody can stop when the warmth and comfort is gone

A blanket has covered the sky into a mere memory

All we can do is wait to see what our next day will bring

A combination that will never be separated

For it keeps the balance of life intact

With an early start and then to be finished at last


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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      raciniwa I think sometimes at night we do more than what we could ever do during our day.We just don't remember it and then during the day we try to finish where we left off.I love when our souls rest then our happiness and love can travel to new heights. Thanx so much and may each night bring you more peace and tranquility.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      night give us the chance to rest and let our souls roam free...

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      katyzzz I wonder if it is the day that we carry all our dreams out that we make at night.Before I thought day was more important than night.Now I think it is the opposite.At night we dream and relax and spend more time with the people we love even if sleep is all we do.We are the safest and happiest.We make all our plans (unconsciously for the next day)Then it is only when we wake we attempt to carry them out.Thank you for the insight I didn't see.So once again life is a see saw.What comes up must come down.The proper balance is most important thing to me.Have a wonderful day and I hope you had a wonderful Fourth Of July.

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      katyzzz 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      The sun and daylight is so special, but night gives us some time for ourselves and our family and thinking, very interesting hub my pussy cat friend

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      picklesandrufus I can't picture life without the beautiful sun.Even though it is 90 here in Maine today.I can't wait for a breeze to come and take me away.Thanx and have a great afternoon.

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      picklesandrufus 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      Lovely! The sunshine really does offer a totally different mood than when the sun goes down, doesn't it?

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      gmwilliams I was uneasy about the length of it and I wanted to add more but some how it felt complete.Thanx for reading and making my morning.I wish you a day of unexpected surprises that will challenge your hearts desires and that will inspire you for hours.

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      Grace Marguerite Williams 5 years ago from the Greatest City In The World-New York City, New York

      Beautifully descriptive poem. I feel so relaxed reading it!