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When Time Is Your Best Friend

Updated on November 4, 2010

When Things Go Smooth

When was the last time things just seemed to flow

Like a faucet on low

You watch the water constantly pouring out of its spout

There is a kind of peace in the air with a sshhh sound

The water flowing at a steady pace

You know things just somehow fall into place

You can not explain it

You try but with no avail

The day is going perfect in every way

The people you see are all happy

Your timing is impeccable

You are so relaxed you could be asleep

Your breathing brings the utmost energy to your soul

Even when no words are spoken

The complete silence is golden

I often wonder how to make this day last

More often than not

I get lost in all my positive emotions

I feel this is the life I am meant to live

I try to share it with others but they can't feel what I feel

They can't see what I see

So how do I explain a day in heaven

Just learning how to rejoice with all my body mind and soul

I smile back at you and you ask What?

I say it is nothing but the greatest feeling on earth

What? You ask again.


You are weird

No I am happy

I hope someday you too will experience the feeling of freedom and love

Rolled into a ball that makes hearts beat fast and all things astonishing


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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Daydreamer Maybe the more we focus on the wonderful days the easier these days will increasingly come.The next time you are having an incredible day please share so I can enjoy it too.Micky Dee I can't think of a better way than celebrating one more day of enjoying what brings you the most happiness.It is like a bike race and your in the top ten.You know you have what it takes and you have everything working in perfect rhythm.The feeling is undescribable!The only thing better is sharing it with the world.Please feel free to explain the greatest pleasure from all the pain and practice you put in.Thank you both.

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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      Let's spend our time wisely. Time is in a hurry.

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      daydreamer13 7 years ago

      Very nicely written. Well done!

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      sky2day They say the Lord works in mysterious ways.I love to be Thankful for many things but most my peace of mind.Life is such a wonderful place for me to constantly try to figure out.I am search of a few more pieces to put together the million piece puzzle.(lol)Thank you for reading.

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      skye2day 7 years ago from Rocky Mountains

      dream on, beautiful heartfelt inspiring hub of love. I can relate. You love the Lord. May His favor keep shining in you and on you. I truly enjoyed your writing. Hugs dream on.