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When Time Stops...Still

Updated on May 14, 2013


We search..

for that moment

in time

when others pass...

without even noticing

that you have smiled ..


Love... is

when time stops still....

frozen


It happens.... in an instant ..

The only reason you see...

the beauty of love

is because it is fleeting..


A second of wonderment...

happens

your pulse beats faster..

your blood rushes.....

through your every fiber


That is when....

you are really alive

for that frozen

moment in time

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    • cleaner3 profile image
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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Rochelle .. you are to kind..

      @ Thank You Dim.. for the visit .. keep writing those poems ..

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Voted up and beautiful.

      It is a truly lovely poem

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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      Awesome words and pictures :) Have a blessed week :)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Eddi..

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Brilliant and voted up.

      Eddy.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Ed.. you have way to much time on your hands my friend..

      @ thank you Doc..

      @Anna .. thank you for the visit and the comment..

      @Thank you Deborah .. glad to bring a smile to your face

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      beautifully done.. I applaud you.. images are wonderful.. thank you Michael and many blessings to you

      Debbie

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      Anna Haven 4 years ago from Scotland

      Something beautiful, caught and held. Nicely done.

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      You have portrayed a moment of time very lovely. where do you find these beautiful images? simply breath-taking. well done Michael

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      ahorseback 4 years ago

      You cut right to the chase my good friend ! Awesome !..... [I love that cat photo ] A male after sex ?.....Ed

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Faith Reaper .. thank you my loyal friend .. your hubs always inspire me to write and lift me up..

      @ Frank .. thank you for the comment and the visit

      @La thing.. thank you for those kind words

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      You captured the essence very beautifully, a moment in time..... As it stops! Wonderful read, Mike. Voting up and awesome....

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      this was very well done.. bravo my friend :)

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, wow, beautifully written to describe that very moment in time!!!

      Loved reading this, it flowed so well.

      Excellent write.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      Hugs and love, Faith Reaper