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When it's all said and done!

Updated on March 3, 2012

When it’s all said and done!

You will only have

the ones that you

were being rude

while acting very

Disrespectful to

that's your parents.

You then may find

yourself in this one

situation asking.

Why if that's what

I was doing for sure

and all you people

had already known

you never told me

the way that i would

be ending up later.

That's the way it

Is for you now !

Because no one

will favor a rude

disrespectful kid.

Over one that is

respectful, and

spends little time

wondering about

who and what they

Will grow up to be!

If they'll ever be

anything close like

their own parents.

When it is all said

When reality says

It’s done, it's done!.

so now you will

be left wondering

where are your old

crazy, and often

miserable friends?

and why they never

knew anything about

things like these.

But you were told

that misery needs

all the company

that it can get!

Also that birds of

one feather will be

flocked together!

So instead of you

having to end up

in this situation.

Being late, needing

forgiveness, and all

possible compassion.

out of all the friends

your parents were

always the ones

who have always been

the ones to end up

eating the rotten end

of the your stick.

For all those years

while you were

stubborn and wild

forgetting at will

who were parents

who's was the child

Following those

bad company

Thinking about

Pulling off your

next trick.

Be sure to let

Your own children

Know about this.

Tell them that

Time wasted will

never stand any

chance of it ever

Being regained

Your defenses will

have you always

Quickly on the run.

When it’s all said and done!


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    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      May God's blessing reign on you dear lady, So true not too many seems to know a good thing until way after it's gone. Greatly appreciated Rose.

      It's all inside you , beautiful comments every time.

      God Bless.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      It's a never ending cycle. We don't always listen to our parents and later wish we had and then the parents are gone and we miss them. God bless.

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Welcome aboard crisSp.. It is so nice to hear from folks like yourself because these are the little ways that I can help. There are basically two sides or even as much as any one would like to put to every story I would usually only see two the cause and the effect.

      In matters pertaining to parents and kids I can be a little lopsided and lean to on the parents side , but that come with authority from the Most High when he almost commanded us to honor thy mother so that thy days may be long.

      But I have just about witnessed and spoke to quite a lot of parents and kids, and thank God have seen some great results , and in this day, these attitudes are running rampant.

      My best advise to you will almost always ask you to let the truth prevail, at all times in your thoughts, never regrets or sorrow , it's a time when whatever strength that's left in you must be channeled positively.You must hold on, my mom is 91 she holds on greatly and positively.

      Thanks for you comment .


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      CrisSp 5 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Interesting read! As a parent who's still hurting since my daughter went on a different direction in life, your write-up hits me to the bone. I'm holding on!

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks brethren Frank . you too got some great things bubbling to come out of that memory bank , I get hit by these flashes so often , just like this one and I can go on and on.

      Yes that 's truth , who else can we hurt? That's why I love the parents topic, where I am free to ask . Did you call your mom today , of wretched child.

      It really doesn't matter who reacts how , I am only one man and I say it my way. Guilty or not guilty.

      Do you remember when you came into that big old discussion and said what your great spirit told you to , you obeyed, and because of the world we live in . Because greater is he that is in you than in the world.

      Bless brethren.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      so much truth in your words.. which reminds me of that coined phrase you always hurt the ones you love.. these words really sink into me thanks for share..bless you