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Whisper My Name

Updated on February 5, 2011
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Whisper my name in your dreams, My Love.

Whisper my name in your dreams...

You make my world so much brighter, it seems.

Whisper my name in your dreams.


Whisper my name when you weep, My Love.

Whisper my name when you weep...

Each precious tear drop I'll cherish and keep...

Whisper my name when you weep.


Whisper my name when you smile, My Love.

Whisper my name when you smile.

Your joy inspires my heart in such style...

Whisper my name when you smile.


Whisper my name in your heart, My Love.

Whisper my name in your heart.

Know that in spirit we're never apart...

Whisper my name in your heart.

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      K.A.E Grove 6 years ago from Australia

      This was beautiful and sweet, a soft love poem filled with heart stirring emotion, very nice

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      nighthag, Thanks for reading and for the lovely comment. From you, it means alot!

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ....this is confession time at the Hub - but I whisper your name every night before I drift off to sleep .....

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      AngusNz 6 years ago from Auckland

      Truly did affect me. Bravo

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      Denizee 6 years ago

      Inspiring! True love can exist and you have written about it with the sweetest emotions and heartfelt stirring cadence with chosen words that enhance this poem.

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      Epigramman, made me blush! Thats so sweet!!!

      AngusNz, I am just thrilled. Thank you kindly, Sir!

      Denizee,Thank you! I wasn't sure about this one, thought maybe the repetition was too much...but couldn't do it any differently, then it didn't work for me...so as it flows it goes...I am really thrilled that you like it!

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      Pixel-Alchemist 6 years ago from Waitakere Auckland : New Zealand

      I can say I am lucky enough to know true love, to know of the love you have so perfectly captured in this poem. Words can not truly express what I think when I read this poem knowing it is a truth few ever get to know. Which is why I am so thankful I am one of those lucky people that do. Thank you Tender Heart for writing what lay within my heart and soul each day. thank you again for sharing your great talent, which I find so uplifting and inspiring

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      PA, you are lucky indeed, my friend. It is a true honor to share my heart with another tender heart!

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      Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

      I'm a fan of this one. Liked the repitition and rhyming.

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      Epigramman, upon second thought, I fear such a sweet, endearing act may give you nightmares!

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      Kathi 6 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

      I too like the repetition and rhyme in this beautiful sonnet! I will return to this one on occasion! One of my favorites!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Whispering,Beautiful words.

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      Marina Lester 6 years ago

      "Know that in spirit we're never apart..." That is a true joy of love. Always treasure it's gifts, and thank you for sharing it with us here. :)

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      F.B. Spannigan 6 years ago from Unknown

      Hey good job. Thank you for the comment on Endless Night. I wrote it myself (not kidding) and it took 15 minutes beleive it or not.

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      rexy 6 years ago

      yourn poems are beautiful and meaningful......

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      F.B.Spannigan, thank you for stopping by and leaving an encouraging comment. I believe you, totally. Often, when writing from the heart, words just flow effortlessly through the pen. Blows my mind! Endless Night would make Lady Ga Ga proud!

      Rexy, thanks so much for taking the time to read my writing and leaving such a lovely comment!It means more than you know.

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      PenMePretty 6 years ago from Franklin

      Love the flow of Whisper My Name. Thumbs up! Thanks for reading me.

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      PenMePretty, Thank you for the read and sweet comment! I enjoy reading your work too!

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      janbee 6 years ago

      ahhh.Ms.Tnderhrt....how could I have missed this one? Such a beautiful love poem ! Touched my heart! Up & Awesome my friend...tender and loving...as is the writer !

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      This is so tender, and beautiful poem! It flows so softly.... Voting up!

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      tnderhrt23 4 years ago

      LaThing, thank you so much!

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