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Whisper In The Wind (poem)

Updated on April 25, 2016

A whisper in the wind so gently fell

Upon a sleeping garden rich with dew

The tears of dreams still waiting to come true

Amid the blossom of dawn’s morning spell


This whisper in the wind its secret flew

Across the hearts of flowers which there dwell

Who felt the wonder there among them swell

Their light and reason soon would be in view


A moment of silence took all around

A chorus of beauty waits to astound

What whisper of the wind was so profound


Come see the glory and meaning to this

Amid such perfection how could we dismiss

Now whole world waits to feel true lovers kiss


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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Loved this passionate poem. Keep writing and expressing your wisdom.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      That is beautiful. Real poetry. Loved it.

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      A moment of silence took all around

      A chorus of beauty waits to astound

      What whisper of the wind was so profound

      A great poem and particularly loved the above words.

      Voted up and enjoy your day Martin.


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      Devika Primić 5 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      The photo is most beautiful and the words of expression has great strength of love.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Lovely poem.

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Very passionate and intense, Mh!

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      DJ Anderson 5 years ago

      Amazingly beautiful, Martin.

      The music was magnificent and like the fragrant bouquet of wine,

      the music paired nicely with the poem.


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      Ruby Jean Richert 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is another beautiful poem...You are so gifted..Thank you for writing each day....

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Spring always seems to sentimentally attract new found love, eh?

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      thost 5 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

      Very romantic Martin. Thank you.

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Beautiful write!!

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      you really know how to tame words.. voted awesome mhatter!

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Hi Martin,

      "The tears of dreams still waiting to come true"

      Filled with beauty and intensity.

      Voted up and away

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      I love the anticipation in this poem. I can almost hear the lovers taking each other's breath away yearning for their lips to touch.