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Why... I ..You

Updated on May 25, 2012

Why Do You Cry My heart ?


Why do you cry my heart ?

Why do my tears flow like rain ?

Why do I only feel heartache ?

Why do I only.... feel the pain ?


I should be happy to have freedom !

I should be shouting with glee !

I should be jumping with happiness !

I should be spreading my wings !


You should be the one so blue,

You should be the one so sad,

You should have the broken heart,

You should be the one who's mad.


Why did we think we had it all ?

I should not have wanted more !

You should try to understand,

Our love is broken to the core.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      raci, thank ypu my loyal follower.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      why should it be that way?i really don't have an inkling...what i know is you write well my friend...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      rahul, thanks for your comments, my friend.

      you give me to much credit to me, but i see you do spread it around to all the wonderful poets on the hubs. you are great to give all this encouragement to all who write and especially yourself.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Pain written all over it!

      Great Poetry Michael!

      Pain resides inside you which comes out reborn as beauty in your words

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      bobbi, thank you for visiting. yes only until the next time does the heart feel the hurt. LOL. where is the love?

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      PurvisBobbi44 5 years ago from Florida

      cleaner3,

      Only another love can heal a broken heart. Time does not heal---it only nurses the pain.

      I voted up and beautiful.

      Your Hub Friend,

      Bobbi

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      tillie, thank you for commenting i knew that pain but time heals all wounds.

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      Mary Craig 5 years ago from New York

      I can only hope you are not the one feeling this pain! What a sad end to a relationship..."our love is broken to the core." Voted up.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @hatter, thanks for your comment.

      @ max , my true supporter, thanks max, for your kind words.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Such a torn, emotional sadness, Michael, you have a gift to capture the true feelings!

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      quite nice

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Katrine, thank you for your unwavering support. your comments are always looked at with much fondness. thank you .

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Michael beautiful as always...so deep, full of strong emotions.