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Poem: Why you can't Lose!

Updated on March 15, 2012

How could you Lose?

You can only lose

because you went

ahead an entered

into that said game

of win or loose,

just like Adam

as he stood in

the Garden of Eden.

Doubt if you wish

that were you !

But now look what

you choose to do.

But you must know

that you owe to


Something better.

Must understand

that these are

the reasons why

those who don't

believe that

if they turn

around and lie.

Then they

would surely die

That's the way

they would lose.


you slipped

out of that

true life that

was given to you

and then you

placed yourself

into a game of

Luck and chance.

The life that we

presently live.

Where we have

grown enough

to know and love.

Is nothing but a

“win, win”

So how could

you be the

only one to lose?

If that which is


the most valuable

thing any one

can receive .

How could it

single you out

to be the only

one to receive

the opposite

end of the deal?

We have also

understood it

to be that one

That's called a

miserable death.

Something is then

obviously wrong

with you!

Are you cursed?

You are the only

one holding

the true answer.

The quicker

you find out

the other side

of death.

There is more.

the more you

will know about

what chance

you may possibly

have at any kind

of forgiveness .

It is that same

beautiful chance

you gave up for

this wortlhess life

which you live

Of win and lose..

The life you had

was to be lived

with one purpose

to understand

while enjoying

the reason you

were put here.

Which would

then eventually

open your eyes

to all those


possibilities why

taking the next

step in finding out

where that true life

which was given

to you, leads to!

Where it really goes.

Since It never dies

It never loses

it was given to us

by the Most High.

then you would

easily understand!

Why you can’t lose!


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      Lenzy 6 years ago from Arlington, Texas

      I enjoyed reading your poem Sky. It was very thought provoking in making us think about our humanity and God's redemtion. Have a glorious Easter. Lenzy

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks dear mljd.It's ours, and I know the reason why there is a little difficulty in being obedient. For even I at one time was saying to others , why am I responsible for what Adam has done. The truth is he is also Me, and I would have done the same . Look at the state of our world at this time. I love to use myself as reference . Do onto others.


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      mljdgulley354 6 years ago

      Great and powerful words Sky. We truly only have one life to live here on earth but we are given everything we need to live that life if we will only accept.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks Caroline and as the word say : Let your light so shine before man , so they may see your great works and Glorify the Most High God.

      You are a favorite, stay that way.

      God is the answer .


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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Hi Sky what a great poem! Loved it. Truly inspirational. Full of light and love as always!

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thank you dear Blossoms. Such a sweet comment. You are never too old to learn and that's me it sounds so perfect I am dying to say it to someone , I came close ,but never out it this way. Thanks you!

      Like is filled with teachers God placed them there ,that's why we cannot lose!

      Have a blessed day .

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 6 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Wonderful thoughts expressed in such a meaningful way. Voted up and beautiful.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      That you Eddy . For without those kind and sincre comments from folks like your kind self. It would have easily appeared that these are not the places for those like me.

      I know that a welcome from those beautiful folks like you easily defeats all that those that are selfish , and evil in their ways. Together with God being my light and my salvation , and those that contributes in the spreading of his word, all these won't be possible.

      I will be there for you as long as the Most High see's fitting for me to remain here.

      Gods love and truth to you and yours , and may his light continue to guide.

      A blessed and wonderful w/end to you and yours also.

      Give Thanks.

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      Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

      Beautiful;true and powerful as always.

      Thank you so much Sky for the gems that you share with us all.

      Take care my friend and enjoy your wekeend.


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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks Rose . I know for sure you are one of those who stress this quite a lot , taking God's special works in us for granted , and it's always great when you add exactly the way you feel, because that's the way we also use to keep ourselves in line. My mother will tell me to make sure my house is clean , before I can ever tell someone of the house.

      She said how can a burnt pan go on to tell the kettle , his behind is black. Oh how I love my Mom, I live her.

      Stay great and believing in your truth Rose.


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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      A friend of mine gave me a copy of the book:

      "Space, Time and Medicine. Then we had a brief conversation. I never forgot him to this day, he was nat a priest but always dressed like one. This was about 30 years ago.

      Thanks Katrine , your writing reminds me of that friend and your comments bravely does exactly what our conversation did to me . You are onto something great keep owning it , the vibes is powerful.


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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks thelyricwriter. God will never let you down , I can feel where you are heading m it's in your words and he knows , the proof is the pud din.

      Greatly appreciate each and everyone of your comments . There are people who can transform words into action and I believe that God is great with me. I am sure,and I need you to also be sure.

      Love and patience spells the word God in you.

      Bless my brethren.

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      KatrineDalMonte 6 years ago

      Hi, if we live our life fully, with high purpose and noble ideals, when we understand that the higher source is part of us and lives within us, and that the universal power has no end, we will know that the spirit can never die, it will go on in another form through the time and space.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome! With the Lord at your side you can't lose. However there are too many people who stray from the path of faith and that is a sad waste of the greatest gift of all - life. God bless.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 6 years ago from West Virginia

      Up, useful, awesome, and beautiful. You are truly a son of God brother. God Bless you my friend. Sky, you are inspirational to me. Your poetry takes within me, the soul that is. You explain so gratefully of how God loves us and everything he can do for us. For that my friend, I am blessed. Your poetry is beautiful, sincere, and wise. Just another great example of that and so much more Sky.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks teaches . Just thinking about you wonderful breakfast this morning , made me thing a little deeper . lol God is great and it's sad to see people who simply refuses to think deep , all for selfish reasons.

      I am never jealous , can't be selfish , did not get everything correct no one can. I am too old to still make excuses , or to do things out of senseless reasons.

      I will state this again, if you believe that something could come from nothing. Let that something be the one and very first thing and have some respect for truth , because that;s what you are going to go around professing especially to your parents and love ones.

      How coulsd they believe that a monkey came from nowhere and evolve into you and I .

      You are building things to survive a hurricane, but you try to be so stubborn and be the breakaway from the family to take them no where but to sorrow.

      I pray that the Most High show you the reason. I hope that all of mankind feel what I feel and see what I see when my eyes are even closed .

      Thanks teaches ,it's your comment that inspired this thought.

      Bless, and keep on believing so that when the things change , you won't cry , you are in the greatest hands.

      Just keep thinking.

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      Dianna Mendez 6 years ago

      Life is worth living and I am thankful for the One who made it all possible. We can't lose. Yes, we all have a purpose in life. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks Samantha . That's actually the truth. Once we get a chance at life , it's a win win situation. If we are the only entity that can also turn around and make us lose, whose fault? Therefore thank you dear lady you did say.

      Beautiful! Walk good!

      Blessings to you and yours.


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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      I will stay until you cross the line brethren, I wrote much more but there was a reason this five minutes came so quick.

      God is great .

      Sincere thanks , I told you all about the Bible being so wisely written it could only come from God.


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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      I joined you purposely and that's where

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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      Sky you've just hit amazing HARD! up and awesome and that's why I can't lose.. great Hub my friend and thanks so much for the share