ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel

Will His Longing Last? - A Poem

Updated on July 7, 2017

He love me, he said

Then he stood there towering me

So tall, so beautiful

with a pair of very sad eye

Did I broke his heart?

I fear him

I fear of how he makes me feel

Trapped by a cob web of

His gentle hands

And sweet voice

Of a man


Wrapped into warm good moments

Blinded by foolish happiness

While pain lurking in the corner

With daggard of fury in it's hand

And then again; I'll doom

Yes, you don't have to mock me

I know!

This is a coward act

But I fully stuffed with pain

With dying wishes

Or cold stoned heart Will do

Then I will never feel anything ever again!

But there he is

The most beautiful man I ever seen

Standing in front of me

Waiting with his passionate love

And dreaming eyes

Will his longing last? I asked myself

Looking wary at petals of Roses

Which scattered near my feets

From the bouquet he hold in front of me

Will his longing last?



Submit a Comment
  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you very much Mr. E. Love to see you around and heard good words from you. I'll visit you soon. ^_^

  • epigramman profile image


    7 years ago

    ...oh dear me ......this took my breath away - literally - and I just had to sit back and take a break and enjoy this moment with you the title too - wish I wrote that one - lol - sounds like a Leonard Cohen song - wow and double hub-wow - I will post this most sincerely and most enthusiastically to my Facebook page with a direct link back here - and so very happy to see you once again - my dear friend and world class writer - with warm wishes and good energy sent to you from lake erie time ontario canada 12:33am

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ahorseback: Awww, that is so sweet. Thank you. ^^

    If it is God's will, yes, I believe the moment will come eventually. And what score? hehehe. It's gone already. :D

    Thank you, Dad.

  • profile image


    7 years ago

    Freya , One day....

    the few rose pettles at your feet

    will grow into a field of flowers

    overtaking all others

    And from out of a meadow

    of weeds

    will grow one love

    for Freya.........

    And look at that score!!!!

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Nell Rose : That's the easiest way to save myself from heartache caused by disappointed love. My mom will kill me if she learned that I had scared another man away again. lol. Thank you, Nell. ^^

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Writer20: Thank you very much. \^o^/ yaiy! Hehehe

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Movie Master : that's hard to tell. Only time will answer it. Thank you, dear. ^^

  • Nell Rose profile image

    Nell Rose 

    7 years ago from England

    Hi, Freya, this was a beautiful poem, and it says that sometimes we have to go on our own feelings, trust those feelings, and if you feel its right go for it! if not, then its easier to walk away, as you said in the comment in my hub, lovely!

  • writer20 profile image

    Joyce Haragsim 

    7 years ago from Southern Nevada

    This is such a touching poem. voted up and awesome.

  • Movie Master profile image

    Movie Master 

    7 years ago from United Kingdom

    I hope his longing will last Freya...

    Very beautiful poem.

    Best wishes MM


This website uses cookies

As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.

For more information on managing or withdrawing consents and how we handle data, visit our Privacy Policy at:

Show Details
HubPages Device IDThis is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.
LoginThis is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.
Google RecaptchaThis is used to prevent bots and spam. (Privacy Policy)
AkismetThis is used to detect comment spam. (Privacy Policy)
HubPages Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide data on traffic to our website, all personally identifyable data is anonymized. (Privacy Policy)
HubPages Traffic PixelThis is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.
Amazon Web ServicesThis is a cloud services platform that we used to host our service. (Privacy Policy)
CloudflareThis is a cloud CDN service that we use to efficiently deliver files required for our service to operate such as javascript, cascading style sheets, images, and videos. (Privacy Policy)
Google Hosted LibrariesJavascript software libraries such as jQuery are loaded at endpoints on the or domains, for performance and efficiency reasons. (Privacy Policy)
Google Custom SearchThis is feature allows you to search the site. (Privacy Policy)
Google MapsSome articles have Google Maps embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
Google ChartsThis is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy)
Google AdSense Host APIThis service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
Google YouTubeSome articles have YouTube videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
VimeoSome articles have Vimeo videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
PaypalThis is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
Facebook LoginYou can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
MavenThis supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy)
Google AdSenseThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Google DoubleClickGoogle provides ad serving technology and runs an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Index ExchangeThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
SovrnThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Facebook AdsThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Amazon Unified Ad MarketplaceThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
AppNexusThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
OpenxThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Rubicon ProjectThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
TripleLiftThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Say MediaWe partner with Say Media to deliver ad campaigns on our sites. (Privacy Policy)
Remarketing PixelsWe may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.
Conversion Tracking PixelsWe may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.
Author Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy)
ComscoreComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy)
Amazon Tracking PixelSome articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy)
ClickscoThis is a data management platform studying reader behavior (Privacy Policy)