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Will His Longing Last? - A Poem

Updated on July 7, 2017
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He love me, he said

Then he stood there towering me

So tall, so beautiful

with a pair of very sad eye

Did I broke his heart?

I fear him

I fear of how he makes me feel

Trapped by a cob web of

His gentle hands

And sweet voice

Of a man

Strangle

Wrapped into warm good moments

Blinded by foolish happiness

While pain lurking in the corner

With daggard of fury in it's hand

And then again; I'll doom

Yes, you don't have to mock me

I know!

This is a coward act

But I fully stuffed with pain

With dying wishes

Or cold stoned heart Will do

Then I will never feel anything ever again!

But there he is

The most beautiful man I ever seen

Standing in front of me

Waiting with his passionate love

And dreaming eyes

Will his longing last? I asked myself

Looking wary at petals of Roses

Which scattered near my feets

From the bouquet he hold in front of me

Will his longing last?

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    Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

    I hope his longing will last Freya...

    Very beautiful poem.

    Best wishes MM

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    Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

    This is such a touching poem. voted up and awesome.

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    Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

    Hi, Freya, this was a beautiful poem, and it says that sometimes we have to go on our own feelings, trust those feelings, and if you feel its right go for it! if not, then its easier to walk away, as you said in the comment in my hub, lovely!

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Movie Master : that's hard to tell. Only time will answer it. Thank you, dear. ^^

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Writer20: Thank you very much. \^o^/ yaiy! Hehehe

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Nell Rose : That's the easiest way to save myself from heartache caused by disappointed love. My mom will kill me if she learned that I had scared another man away again. lol. Thank you, Nell. ^^

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    ahorseback 5 years ago

    Freya , One day....

    the few rose pettles at your feet

    will grow into a field of flowers

    overtaking all others

    And from out of a meadow

    of weeds

    will grow one love

    for Freya.........

    And look at that score!!!!

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ahorseback: Awww, that is so sweet. Thank you. ^^

    If it is God's will, yes, I believe the moment will come eventually. And what score? hehehe. It's gone already. :D

    Thank you, Dad.

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    epigramman 5 years ago

    ...oh dear me ......this took my breath away - literally - and I just had to sit back and take a break and enjoy this moment with you .....love the title too - wish I wrote that one - lol - sounds like a Leonard Cohen song - wow and double hub-wow - I will post this most sincerely and most enthusiastically to my Facebook page with a direct link back here - and so very happy to see you once again - my dear friend and world class writer - with warm wishes and good energy sent to you from lake erie time ontario canada 12:33am

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you very much Mr. E. Love to see you around and heard good words from you. I'll visit you soon. ^_^

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