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Will You?

Updated on April 19, 2012


Constricted in my own skin,

I cry for my release

Trapped in a world I made my own

Will you think of yesterday to mourn?


My flaws are open,

Displayed for your perception

Will you see what has been offered?


Shadowed by regretful words

My proclamation has been presented

Will you hear the words I've spoken?


Lost in a sea without a vessel

Drowning, here I tread

Will you grant me my salvation?

Or will you be my own demise?

┬ęBethany Vine

4.20.12


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      BethanyLynn211 5 years ago from Bangor, Pa

      Awesome! Thank you KaraokeGuy! =]

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Thanks for sharing, Bethany. I shared this!

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      BethanyLynn211 5 years ago from Bangor, Pa

      Thank you Rajan :)

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 5 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      Bethany, breathtaking poem. You know how to play with words! Voted up, awesome.