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Will You Love Me Forever

Updated on May 18, 2013
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Will You Love Me Forever

Do you love me or is it just a dream

You're like a shimmering moon beam

Dancing through the night

Your smile shines a light

That comforts my fears

And chases away my tears

Can we be together

Will you love me forever


Do I love you or do I think I do

Is there really such a thing as a love so true

It's such a strange sensation

LIke something from my imagination

I've never felt so out of touch before

So I have to implore

Can we be together

Will you love me forever


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© 2013 Shannon

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. This was so romantically wonderful. Passing this on.

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Haha. :) Thanks for the visit and for the votes and share.

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      Lurana Brown 3 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      That new love feeling---you captured it well! :-) Lurana

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      That's, Lurana.

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Oh! Someone was speaking to me and I started typing what was said to m. Lucky I got your name right! I meant to say "thanks, Lurana."

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      Lurana Brown 3 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      I guessed that. :-)

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Good. Because it would be a terrible introduction to a wonderful person such as yourself - not to mention a bit redundant, considering you already signed your name. ;)

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      Lurana Brown 3 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Haha! I didn't even see it reading that way. Funny.

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Hehe

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      always exploring 3 years ago

      Beautiful Shannon..I wonder how many people have wanted to ask that question?

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      I imagine just about anybody falling in love wants to ask it. :)

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      Oh shanmarie, you are quickly becoming one of my favorites!!! This is so beautiful... and again... I can relate. You write with such realness and such an innocent kind of raw. I don't know a girl over 12 that hasn't thought the words you put so beautifully to a poem. AHHH! LOVE IT!

      Up, awesome and beautiful!

      Cat

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      What a compliment, thanks, Cat!

      But, shhhhh, and I'll tell you a secret. I wasn't much older than 12 (16) when I wrote that! Hahaha. I did, of course, refine it slightly. I had a third verse attached that I hate now.

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      Veronicarain 3 years ago from Cincinnati, Ohio

      I thought it was great and it made me feel a certain kind of way like memories but knew excitement...

      can't explain exactly but I enjoyed that.

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Thanks, Veronica. I'm glad you liked it, and nice to meet you. :) I visited your page and tried to comment on one, but there was nowhere to leave a comment.

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      Veronicarain 3 years ago from Cincinnati, Ohio

      You're welcome. I didn't realize comments couldn't be left. Thanks for telling me. Fixing that right away.

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      I still couldn't comment on the one I tried to comment on, Veronica. But, I left a comment on another one that was very interesting.

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      shanmarie,

      Phew... I'm back.. :D, I mentioned this on another hub, but I think it's beautiful all the same, fact is, it was probably written with real emotion and that is the kind of poetry that I feel the most connected too! I wish I could be 16 again and sit down with a journal :D

      Cat

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      hehe...yeah...I have a journal that I've had since I was a teenager. It's full of poetry, some of my friends'. I fell in love with the inscription on the inside that says:

      Follow Your Heart

      Cast your dreams

      upon these pages

      and reach for the music

      that dances within

      your soul.

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      I tell ya what, I"ll post some tonight....just for you, Cat. At least I'll be laughing with you when you giggle. :-p

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      That'a girl! That's what I like to hear... I think you'll be surprised to find people will receive them well. Hey... I won't be giggling, stop that nonsense :D

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Hehe...because I'll save the most giggle worthy for my journal only. ;)

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