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Will You Listen

Updated on April 4, 2012

This poem was inspired by The Lovely Princess Prisca



will you listen

when I whisper in your ear

will you listen

When I say I love you dear


will you listen

when i try to apoligize

will you listen

As i stare into your eyes


will you listen

for the words you want to hear

will you listen

as I tell you all my fears


will you listen...

when I say I love you

will you say... I love you too



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    • cleaner3 profile image
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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Max, you are having to much fun for one little bird. are you trying to see them all. I am so suprised that you will do this

      what a woman!!!

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      The sweetest thing! Lovely poem, such a word play!

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      PurvisBobbi44 5 years ago from Florida

      Michael,

      That was a beautiful poem to someone special who has touched your heart. And she loves you too.

      I voted up, awesome and beautiful.

      Your Hub Friend,

      Bobbi

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Katrine, thanks for commenting, they all say something, but it's usually maybe.

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Lovely Michael, I do hope she also said 'I love you too'. Take care.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful Michael. Your rhyming is excellent..

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      Irob 5 years ago from St. Charles

      really nice poem Cleaner3

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      You are going to give me a big head, stop. You wrote that hub saying it was for a telented and popular poet and I laughed because I thought well that isn't me?LOL

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      Princess Prisca 5 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

      My ArchAngel,

      I am most honored and I thankfully accept my poetry composed by 'one of the greats!'

      Blessings!

      Ciao...Princess Prisca

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      My Lovely Princess, you know that I personalize my poetry when I can. this was for you.

      Love you like a sister

      Michael

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      laurathegentleman 5 years ago from Chapel Hill, NC

      Beautiful and simple. You have always been incredible at conveying raw emotion without crowding it with words...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ My beautiful Lady, thank you for kind words to get praise from you agreat poet is a joy.

      @Teaches, thank you for commenting. you are so right about listening.

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      Princess Prisca 5 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

      My ArchAngel,

      Beautiful and so heartfelt.

      You touched my heart with this one the moment I read it and asked you to publish it. Thank you.

      I am both happy and blessed to know you Michael.

      (The man, the poet:-)

      Voting way way up and across the board!

      Great Job. Love this piece.

      Blessings!

      Ciao...Princess Prisca

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Beautiful words. Listening is opening your heart to someone and truly loving them back.

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      Lady_Tenaz 5 years ago

      That is beautiful! Very smooth all the way through!