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Will This All End (poem)

Updated on June 14, 2012

Will this all end I ask the passing stars

In dreams of forever within your spell

Let’s ask the flowers perhaps they’ll tell

Love to stay welcome in this world of ours

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Those moments of doubt soft kisses will quell

Holding you close will bar us from all scars

In such a rich Joy no manner of mars

So we close our eyes and let our love swell

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As twilight ascends our moments so true

Lost thoughts in silence begin to awake

Longing for chances at which they may rend

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Enduring in this I love only you

No doubt in my mind of any mistake

Darkened with thoughts of when will this all end

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      Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      A common theme in some of my--and others'--poetry. Seems to always end. Lovely poem. Well done.

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      snakeslane 4 years ago from Canada

      An ardent love told in Sonnet, I am impressed Mhatter. Regards, snakeslane

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      An acrostic sonnet

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      snakeslane 4 years ago from Canada

      Omg, it is too, so clever.

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Lovely piece of work my friend.....waiting for the other shoe to drop....excellent!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. This is such a romantic and wonderful poem. Why do all the best things have to end?

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      'Those moments of doubts soft kisses will quill' beautiful, when in love, one should just live in each moment.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      'Those moments of doubts soft kisses will quill' beautiful, when in love, one should just live in each moment.

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      mackyi 4 years ago

      Great love poem. You are very imaginative and were able to find all the right words to express your thoughts. Great job!

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      Voronwe 4 years ago

      Great poem, mhatter! Very beautiful piece of work.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Lovely write (AGAIN). You accomplish this style so well. "Endless Love" brings back some memories of my generation.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Very nicely done!

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      anglnwu 4 years ago

      Lovely love poem. Thanks for sharing.

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      Farhat 4 years ago from Delhi

      beautiful words of the silent moments of feelings..... quite expressive!

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      PurvisBobbi44 4 years ago from Florida

      Wow you knocked that one out of the ball park. Exquisite work--- beautifully written with a unique rhythm with a soft beat.

      Thanks,

      Your Hub Friend,

      Bobbi Purvis

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      Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas

      We worry if we will find love then when we do, we worry if we will lose love. It just goes to show that love always takes two people on the same wave length. Nicely Done! WB

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      Shelley Watson 4 years ago

      Mhatter, The push and pull of love's magic beautifully expressed, Thank you for sharing your talent.

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      leigh anns page 4 years ago from New Jersey

      Beautiful work as always

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      Live To Write 4 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      Very beautiful, and profound. How I have been in that situation a few times. Your poem made me feel. Great hub!

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      Chris Merritt 4 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana

      very cool. I have much to learn, and I really liked this. I think profound it a great word to describe my thoughts on this.

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