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Wind Upon His Face (tanka)

Updated on August 10, 2013

One more day he greets

With a wind upon his face

Causing him to sigh

To be blessed by such a touch

Removing yesterday’s tears


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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Very beautiful. Love it!

      Up and more and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      Nellieanna Hay 3 years ago from TEXAS

      Beautiful imagery, captured in so few words. I love it, Martin. Must vote it up and across!

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Awesome and so beautiful.

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      Shauna L Bowling 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Beautiful, Martin!

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      Thomas Silvia 3 years ago from Massachusetts

      Very beautiful my friend !

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Beautifully said so briefly. Love it.

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      travmaj 3 years ago from australia

      I can only echo the other comments - beautiful. (sigh)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lovely sentiments.

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      Victor W. Kwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

      You, sir, are a great poet.

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      Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Awesome words thanks

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Now that was a great thought. Well done!

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