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Wind Whisper (poem)

Updated on August 28, 2012

The wind returns returns a whispered wish

My heart now burns it yearns a lovers’ gift

In dreams it churns and learns to sweetly drift

And no concerns or spurns can cause a swish


Soft wind recall recall a whispered hope

My soul and all enthrall for one of these

To put a stall to squall perhaps to ease

This mindless sprawl which fall on this to cope


The sun and stars and moon all seem to stall

For moment which a dream and whisper yearn

Event once more returning for its call

Confounding hidden longings which now burn


Sweet wind return return to whisper this

My lips now yearn they burn for lover’s kiss


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      Ann1Az2 5 years ago from Orange, Texas

      I love the thought of the wind whispering things. Great imagery! Interesting music.

      Well done and voted up.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      beautiful poem.

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      Joana e Bruno 5 years ago from Algarve, Portugal

      Hello, Mhatter99, just beautiful, like a dance... Just loved it! Voted up and beautiful and sharing! Take care!

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      I believe this is the first romantic verse I have read of yours. Perhaps, I should say, the most passionate that stirs the heart! Absolutely lovely!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Sigh romance. Voted up and beautiful. Passing this on.

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      Farhat 5 years ago from Delhi

      Oh, i got lost in the serenity!...romance master, you rocked again !

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      Some things just...stick with a person, eh? You're an amazing poet, my mentor..

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Up and awesome. I adore the rhyme scheme, as well as the wonderful words. Bravo!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful, every line ...Bravo Mhatter

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      Patty Kenyon 5 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Absolutely Beautiful!!!! Awesome Job!!!

      Voted Up, Awesome, and Beautiful!!!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Bravo Mhatter!

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      SweetiePie 5 years ago from Southern California, USA

      Very alluring poem.

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Beautiful flow.... You could just hear the wind whisper in your ears! Love it, and enjoyed reading it! Voting up....

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      Anne 5 years ago from Spain

      How I live this poem. You have captured a longing so well. Beautiful words, profound sentiment. Thank you mhatter.

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      Deborah 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Beautiful, it's so romantic. I wish I could write like you, I really love it. Voted up!

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      Mark G Weller 5 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      Sensual and seductive, very lovely.

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      Chris Mills 5 years ago from Missoula, Montana at least until August 2018

      nice, very nice.

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      Terrye Toombs 5 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

      Indeed, I agree with Debbie, a true romantic poem. Well done!

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      Janhorner 5 years ago

      I drifted into the poem, and felt so peaceful. Beautiful.


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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Ohhhh I am going to call you theone of the most Romantic Poet at the hub... that last line

      My lips now yearn they burn for lover’s kiss

      Oh so yearning

      blessed assurance

      My poet friend

      hugs from tennessee