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Winding Unwinding We

Updated on May 1, 2010

Winding Unwinding We~

Our bright moon glows in the nights star lit sky

And then all the plain white shades are quickly lowered

Not shortly after all the plain white doors close in synch

But then the bright sun rises into the harmonically ticking blue lit sky

Then all the shades are all gently raised with morning

Not shortly after all the plain white doors swing open

Up and down all the strangers ways cross

Across all snow white neon streets.

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    • Awful Poet profile image
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      Awful Poet 8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Glad You Stopped By

      @ Deborah

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      Deborah Demander 8 years ago from First Wyoming, then THE WORLD

      You have captured the essence of poetry here.

      Namaste.

    • Debarshi Dutta profile image

      Debarshi Dutta 8 years ago from Calcutta

      pretty imaginative.

    • Awful Poet profile image
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      Awful Poet 8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      That photo stole

      My online attention.

      So I stole It.

      Its Quite Pleasent

      Thank You

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      Renee S 8 years ago from Virginia

      Nice picture and nice poem. You are a good poet.

    • Awful Poet profile image
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      Awful Poet 8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      So Very True Summer

    • Awful Poet profile image
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      Awful Poet 8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Dont Sniffle*

      Heres A

      Electric Hankerchif*

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      kimberlyslyrics 8 years ago

      hi, you don't like me anymore, just because it takes me 3 days to read an email shouldn't stop u from sending them *sniff*

      your AWFUL

      xo

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      Freya Cesare 8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      Good one.

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      SummerSteward 8 years ago from Duluth MN

      Pehraps our error is closing the blinds (our eyes) to the things

      found in the night (darkness), more beauty can be found in the secrets and the things we keep behind doors. Very thought provoking.

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      truster 8 years ago from A Bed of Roses

      Intriguing! LOL

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      JerseyGirl 8 years ago from Jersey Shore

      Loved this... keep publishing.

    • Awful Poet profile image
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      Awful Poet 8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      @TheVoice

      Glad You Stopped By

    • Awful Poet profile image
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      Awful Poet 8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank You @ Sky

      @ Kimberly

      Very Good To Hear From You

      And Glad To Hear You Enjoyed.

      As For The Emails

      Ahw Its Not You Its My Paint.

      As For The Falafel

      Save Me A Bite

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      thevoice 8 years ago from carthage ill

      lovely poem great read thanks

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      kimberlyslyrics 8 years ago

      I love the evening and morning you brought us through.

      Beautifully written and I , anyways fot so many messages in such a short time.

      Bravo Buddy Bravo

      xo

      ps you don't longer email

      is it cause i am female?

      Such a degree of betrayal

      My choo choo has derailed

      All I try is to deep inhale

      visualize a whale

      looking still this pail

      Its over no more hail

      I'm free, out of jail

      yet still no mail

      I will eat a falafel

      and wait for my awful

      ok?

      ha

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      Sky321 8 years ago from Canada

      Nice!

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