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Winter Forest (Haiku)

Updated on July 9, 2012
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Leaves gently falling

Snow flakes covering bare trees

Winter enraptured

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Moonlake,

      Thanks for visiting and commenting!

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      moonlake 5 years ago from America

      Beautiful. Enjoyed it the picture is perfect. Voted up.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Nancy,

      Thanks so much, appreciate it!

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      Nancy Yager 5 years ago from Hamburg, New York

      So beautiful. You were certainly inspired by that picture. Thanks for making my day.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Ruchira,

      Thanks, appreciate it!

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      Ruchira 5 years ago from United States

      beautiful indeed :)

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Suzette,

      Thanks, appreciate the comment!

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      Suzette Walker 5 years ago from Taos, NM

      Beautiful, soft, gentle, haiku! I love the photo - so peaceful and quiet. That kind of snow I love. Well done and well written!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Snow,

      Aww thanks hub friend! You are too kind!

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      snowdrops 5 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      hmmm....100x ups and votes for this haiku!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Katrine,

      Thanks, I am glad I could give your favorite season sone justice! :)

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      KatrineDM 5 years ago

      Lovely imagery of winter, my favorite season of the year, beautiful :-)

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Aubrey,

      Yes, even the Hakius take me at least 40 minutes or so to edit and write! LOL

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      A.E. Williams 5 years ago from Hampton, GA

      I bet that was hard to come up with, buddy. Using so few words has to be difficult! Good job, buddy. :)

      -Aubrey

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Nell,

      Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

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      Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

      Lovely haiku, short but very sweet! lovely, nell

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Bob,

      Great observation! I hope you are not standing on your head! :)

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      Civil War Bob 5 years ago from Glenside, Pennsylvania

      LOL...The question to REALLY ask is whether I'm standing on my feet, or on my head...changes the visual, doesn't it?!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Bob,

      Thanks! Lol. Are you able to get out or do you need a snowplow! :)

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      Civil War Bob 5 years ago from Glenside, Pennsylvania

      Now that I've been serious...

      Leaves gently falling

      Snow flakes covering bare trees

      Winter enraptured

      THERE'S SNOW UP TO MY KNEES!!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Bob,

      Again thanks for your comment and votes!

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      Civil War Bob 5 years ago from Glenside, Pennsylvania

      Well done, Josh...voted up, beautiful, interesting.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Mandar,

      Thanks, I really appreciate it! Thanks for the votes and read. Ok, I will check my email once again for it!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Penny,

      Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

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      Mandar Karandikar 5 years ago from Ratlam, India

      Josh,

      A very beautiful haiku. You did amazingly well on limericks and doing the same here. Voted up and awesome. Its just wonderful how three lines can bring out such powerful emotions and such amazing pictures the nature presents.

      (I am sending u my limerick once more in case u haven't received it please check your mail.)

      :) Mandar

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      pennyofheaven 5 years ago from New Zealand

      Enraptured was an awesome finale. Thanks.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Ocean,

      Glad you liked it, thanks for commenting!

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      oceansider 5 years ago

      I like your haiku Josh.....thank you!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Vicki,

      Aww thanks for reading and leaving me such a sweet comment! I really appreciate it!

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      Victoria Lynn 5 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      That's a beautiful haiku, Josh! I love how you can go from a hilarious hub to serious and pretty poetry. Very cool! Many votes!