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Wisp You Away (poem)

Updated on June 9, 2013

Come with me darling I‘ll wisp you away

A moment to dream

And open a door


Come with me darling I‘ll wisp you away

The stars which you touch

Where made long ago


Remember those heartbeats shared with pillows

And tomorrows were waiting for moments of you

Each chance was a fresh breath of excitement

Your mirror offered a glance at the truth


Soft embers of your safely hid treasures

Calling for the light which once gave them birth

Listen to the long and lasting murmurs

Singing praise of a wonder which once was


Dismember yourself from chains of limits

Those shadows unreal which won’t let you out

You know you deserve promise forgotten

Let me be chorus of splendor of you


Come with me darling I‘ll wisp you away

A moment in time

Forever once knew


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      shanmarie 23 months ago

      An older one, but a beautiful one. Who wouldn't want to let someone whisk them away? Especially back to a better time or place.

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      Theresa Ast 4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Very interesting and melodic. I think my new favorite word is wisp as well. Reminds me of the "will o-the wisp." Theresa

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Brilliant once again Martin.


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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Beautifully romantic poem and - as always - you write so well.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Very beautiful, Martin. Thanks so much for sharing and thinking about us, as you always do.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      An amazing, romantic poem!

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Great words of romance

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Perfectly and romantically wonderful.

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      Graham Lee 4 years ago from Lancashire. England.

      Hi Martin. A delight to read and listen to. Well done.


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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Oh, a beauty here, my kind of poetry! ^

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      "Dismember yourself from chains of limits". This is such a profound line. I love it!

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      kidscrafts 4 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Beautiful! I love the music with the waves background.... I can see myself near those turquoise water!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      And this, I will take with me when I sleep. Wisp shall now be my favorite word! Beautiful Martin... as always!

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, what a lovely thought . . . to be have one wisp you away, especially to that beautiful place in the video with that music playing.

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper