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With you in Mind
With you in mind
I wore these knickers
I have chosen the colors carefully
whatever makes you happy
then I am all for it my paddy
This is all that I can do at this time
our hearts rebirth into one,
within less than a month the hearts emerged
A caramel and a white core of the heart
now nothing can tear us apart,
your smile, your voice,
your shy genuine ways,
a making of someone who cares
I am alive again,
free from darkness that once lies within
It was so cold in my bed,
now, living seem worthwhile
you're not just a fanasty
you became a part or me,
with all feeling of ecstasy
duped or unexplainable
is the human love a divine love?
or the weakness of the flesh
became a form of sexual adversity
The power of love defies all odds,
when I thought love were gone forever,
My Grandmother visionary dreams
lead to my partner in Dublin
where bongos and the tambourings
fill the air with love and harmony
to the sound of the music
emerald eyes , luscious lips
two caring hearts unites,
Come kiss me, love me always.
Comments
I love the story this poem tells and the teller.
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Dr. Strange you to clever for me, yes it tell a story
a love story indeed.
blessed
I'm sorry but when I read the first 2 lines it gave me a chuckle. But yes a lovely story. Did you go to Ireland to visit your grandmother? and that is where you met him. Just lovely
Darknlovely3436,
Greetings from MAKUSR. What lovely lines,
is the human love a divine love?
or the weakness of the flesh
These alone lift your poem. Good one, beautiful.
Lots of Love,
MAKUSR
Is this about someone you know? If so, congratulations!:)
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Rosemary,My Grandmother visionary dreams
lead to my partner in Dublin
It was a dream that my Grandmother, once told me about my life partner, and finally the dream came true.
Thank you for stopping by and commenting
One love
Annie
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Makusr so good to see you on my page,
thank you, for commenting
daffy Duck I think i am in love,
(:) things are happening to me
What a beautiful poem and love story! Voted up, up and away!
You ve brought together sweet words i feel like memorizing. I love this so much. Bless you
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Goodmorning Dexter Y thank you for supporting this straving poet(:) It was written from the heart.
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Ubanichijioke so good to see you, words from deep within,
thank you for see my sweeter side of poetry
So your in love with a fellow Irishman...well most intresting read...bet he is a good story teller...of coursae the Dublin Accent I have been told told is sexy...but then again any forigen accent sounds great at first...wish you the luck of the Irish...but by the way ..we also invented Murphys law...mind how you Go!!!
Michael :0)
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mikeq107 Guilty i guess that you can tell by my write
well, love is a strange thing, (:) and finding love, is
not as hard as we might think, and Yes that Irish accent
getS me all the time
If anything simply cannot go wrong, it will anyway
Yes When I was in Maui it opened a lot of doors..funny never thought of myself as having a Dublin accent untill I heard Gerard butler or Collin farrell,,,tried to lose it for a few years over here..but finaly gave up ..aftre all its who I,m am ;0)
Have a great one say hi to my irish brother:0)
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I love the accent, I also have a accent and I love it
nice meeting Mikeq107
Nice meeting you Too :0)
Yes it very nice to meet you. This is a great poem the somany feelings. up/beautiful
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Nice to meet you Writer 20 and thnk you so much
for reading my poem....
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