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With you in Mind

Updated on October 3, 2011
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With you in mind

I wore these knickers

I have chosen the colors carefully

whatever makes you happy

then I am all for it my paddy

This is all that I can do at this time

our hearts rebirth into one,

within less than a month the hearts emerged

A caramel and a white core of the heart

now nothing can tear us apart,

your smile, your voice,

your shy genuine ways,

a making of someone who cares

I am alive again,

free from darkness that once lies within

It was so cold in my bed,

now, living seem worthwhile

you're not just a fanasty

you became a part or me,

with all feeling of ecstasy

duped or unexplainable

is the human love a divine love?

or the weakness of the flesh

became a form of sexual adversity

The power of love defies all odds,

when I thought love were gone forever,

My Grandmother visionary dreams

lead to my partner in Dublin

where bongos and the tambourings

fill the air with love and harmony

to the sound of the music

emerald eyes , luscious lips

two caring hearts unites,

Come kiss me, love me always.

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      Annie 5 years ago from NewYork

      Nice to meet you Writer 20 and thnk you so much

      for reading my poem....

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Yes it very nice to meet you. This is a great poem the somany feelings. up/beautiful

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      mikeq107 5 years ago

      Nice meeting you Too :0)

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      Annie 5 years ago from NewYork

      I love the accent, I also have a accent and I love it

      nice meeting Mikeq107

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      mikeq107 5 years ago

      Yes When I was in Maui it opened a lot of doors..funny never thought of myself as having a Dublin accent untill I heard Gerard butler or Collin farrell,,,tried to lose it for a few years over here..but finaly gave up ..aftre all its who I,m am ;0)

      Have a great one say hi to my irish brother:0)

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      Annie 5 years ago from NewYork

      mikeq107 Guilty i guess that you can tell by my write

      well, love is a strange thing, (:) and finding love, is

      not as hard as we might think, and Yes that Irish accent

      getS me all the time

      If anything simply cannot go wrong, it will anyway

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      mikeq107 5 years ago

      So your in love with a fellow Irishman...well most intresting read...bet he is a good story teller...of coursae the Dublin Accent I have been told told is sexy...but then again any forigen accent sounds great at first...wish you the luck of the Irish...but by the way ..we also invented Murphys law...mind how you Go!!!

      Michael :0)

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      Annie 6 years ago from NewYork

      Ubanichijioke so good to see you, words from deep within,

      thank you for see my sweeter side of poetry

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      Annie 6 years ago from NewYork

      Goodmorning Dexter Y thank you for supporting this straving poet(:) It was written from the heart.

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 6 years ago from Lagos

      You ve brought together sweet words i feel like memorizing. I love this so much. Bless you

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      Dexter Yarbrough 6 years ago from United States

      What a beautiful poem and love story! Voted up, up and away!

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      Annie 6 years ago from NewYork

      Makusr so good to see you on my page,

      thank you, for commenting

      daffy Duck I think i am in love,

      (:) things are happening to me

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      Annie 6 years ago from NewYork

      Rosemary,My Grandmother visionary dreams

      lead to my partner in Dublin

      It was a dream that my Grandmother, once told me about my life partner, and finally the dream came true.

      Thank you for stopping by and commenting

      One love

      Annie

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      Daffy Duck 6 years ago from Cornelius, Oregon

      Is this about someone you know? If so, congratulations!:)

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      Manoj Kumar Srivastava 6 years ago from India

      Darknlovely3436,

      Greetings from MAKUSR. What lovely lines,

      is the human love a divine love?

      or the weakness of the flesh

      These alone lift your poem. Good one, beautiful.

      Lots of Love,

      MAKUSR

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      Rosemary Sadler 6 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      I'm sorry but when I read the first 2 lines it gave me a chuckle. But yes a lovely story. Did you go to Ireland to visit your grandmother? and that is where you met him. Just lovely

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      Annie 6 years ago from NewYork

      Dr. Strange you to clever for me, yes it tell a story

      a love story indeed.

      blessed

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      Dr. Strange 6 years ago

      I love the story this poem tells and the teller.