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Within Your Possession

Updated on June 30, 2011

Immortal, ascend


This portal, it bends


Light, life, and time


Invading my mind



I walked as a shadow


I crawled through the darkness


Until the sun rose one day


Cast me out of that state




Erase me, oh brightness


Eradicate me, in your likeness


I stand, in awe, in submission


To a will greater than mine is




I vowed not to pray


I prayed not to swear


I swore not to promise


And I broke every one




Broken needs fixing


Fixing seeks broken


Chaos is simple


Chaos is destined




My intentions were true


My truth was misguided


Misguided from birth


Born into night, and




My heart cries for mercy


But mercy is granted


To those who deserve


A shot, or a chance


To redeem, to regain


What was lost in translation


What was sadly erased in


The clashing of nations


And the destruction of icons


Built to replace Him




I love, I seek,


I find, to lose,


I fall, to feel


I bleed, I yield


I fight, I fail


I try, to sail


I sink, I drown


Repeat, recycle, reuse me


For I am yours


Always, in your possession

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      misty95 6 years ago from uk

      Lovely

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      Nellieanna Hay 6 years ago from TEXAS

      I like this, Ben. Your muse deepens and rings true. I am not surprised! Hugs.

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      Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon

      GOD!! the last part just got hold of me! Geee that was epic, [especially the last part!!!!]

      Great stuff as usual :D you got me all addicted all over again :D:D

      Ben, as always thank you for sharing love love it:D

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      Sharon Smith 6 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Hey Benny,

      How are you? This was a very strong, intense piece - really awesome. (as usual) Take care,

      Sharyn

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Repeat, recycle, reuse me

      For I am yours

      -your words are quite intense and this is amazing overall. Loved it. Lucky girl..whoever she is.

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      thanks to everyone who still reads/comments my stuff

      It still means so much to me

      Acer and Cardisa, you've been such loyal fans and I thank you guys :D

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      Carolee Samuda 6 years ago from Jamaica

      Ben, my favorite verse

      "I vowed not to pray

      I prayed not to swear

      I swore not to promise

      And I broke every one"

      Simply amazing! Wonderful! Are there any more amazing words I could use?

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      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      That reminds me Ben,I need to throw my chaos in the recycle bin....intense and effective Benjamin!;))

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      Puroney 6 years ago

      That was awesome Ben, voted up

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      Midianite 6 years ago from Australia

      cool piece man, I really like the feel to it at the start of it (the whole dimensionalism stuff) Voted up.

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      missed ya randy...

      let's just say i write my best when i cross the fine line into crazy

      thank you sweet woman ;]

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      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Damn sweet boy, you blow me away sometimes.