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Within The Moonlight’s Splendor (poem)

Updated on April 28, 2014

Within each moment of the moonlight’s splendor

A fog of my confusion here is formed

I’m taken by these feelings soft and tender

To places dreams and wishes have all warmed

And in an instant marked by my surrender

I’m not quite sure what caused a wind to storm

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Her beauty passed what any song could render

Such fantasies were born to hold her tight

Within each moment of the moonlight’s splendor

Her eyes would echo heartbeats of delight

Before some clarity I could engender

The stars had set our kisses to ignite

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Was here between reality so slender

When lovers’ thoughts were nowhere to found

A soul again would meet with its contender

As once more silent madness was unbound

Within each moment of the moonlight’s splendor

A pool of blood was formed upon the ground

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      Audrey Hunt 3 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      Magnificence throughout! My favorite verse -

      "Her beauty passed what any song could render

      Such fantasies were born to hold her tight

      Within each moment of the moonlight’s splendor

      Her eyes would echo heartbeats of delight

      Before some clarity I could engender

      The stars had set our kisses to ignite"

      So romantic - Thanks my friend. - Audrey

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Well, you managed to surprise me with this one. Perhaps I should've looked at the video first and then I would've seen the ending coming.

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      Suzette Walker suzettetaos 3 years ago from Taos, NM

      Yes, this is beautiful with a surprise ending. The photo is perfect and the music, of course, so appropriate! The meter and rhyme makes this poem flow so well. I enjoyed reading this.

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      Karen Silverman 3 years ago

      What an awesome piece of poetry, M! LOVE the rhyme scheme and rhythm.

      This could not have been easy!

      sharingxx

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      Victor W. Kwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

      Now that was a twist ending.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Loved this. Actually vampires can be quite romantic especially by moonlight.

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