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© Without You

Updated on May 27, 2015

I dream with emptiness

as skies without its birds.

I’m spring without its warmth

as lips without its words.


I fantasize of your image

as vision gone strains to see.

I thirst to taste your flesh

as you do without me.


I long for you and your presence

as an angel that awaits her wings.

I ache for you and your touch

as a lost voice that yearns to sing.


I hunger your gentle caress

as the sand that needs the sea.

I’m vacant without your bond

as you are without me.


Author: Mothers of Nations (Founder)


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God bless you...


Psalms 34:18 "The Lord is close to the brokenhearted; He rescues those whose spirits are crushed."

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    • mothersofnations profile imageAUTHOR

      Mothers of Nations 

      2 years ago

      RobinGrosswirth23 thank you for stopping by and appreciating my poem. Your comment is very kind!

      God bless you...

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      Robin Grosswirth 

      3 years ago from New York

      There are relationships that are additive and there are those that are subtractive and leave us in vacancy. Strong emotive piece. Excellent!

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      Audrey Hunt 

      3 years ago from Idyllwild Ca.

      Your talent for writing poetry shines through at its best with this one.

    • manatita44 profile image

      manatita44 

      3 years ago from london

      Beautiful poetry. Much peace.

    • mothersofnations profile imageAUTHOR

      Mothers of Nations 

      3 years ago

      Teaches12345, thank you for your kind words and understanding. This poem was written some time ago but some emotions were drawn recently and the rest is obvious :) Thank you kindly for stopping my way. God bless you...

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      Dianna Mendez 

      3 years ago

      It is a struggle to face an emptiness from a desired relationship. Your words share this well but also offer hope. The scripture reference adds to the beauty of the truth.

    • mothersofnations profile imageAUTHOR

      Mothers of Nations 

      3 years ago

      MsDora, thank you for your kindness. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. God bless you...

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      Dora Weithers 

      3 years ago from The Caribbean

      Lots of longing in this poem. I think I've been there. Beautiful expressions!

    • mothersofnations profile imageAUTHOR

      Mothers of Nations 

      3 years ago

      Genna East, thank you for stopping by. Your comment is so kind and very appreciated. God bless you!

    • mothersofnations profile imageAUTHOR

      Mothers of Nations 

      3 years ago

      Diana Lee, thank you for the kindness and the vote up! I'm glad you appreciate the poem :) God bless you..

    • mothersofnations profile imageAUTHOR

      Mothers of Nations 

      3 years ago

      SAQIB6608, thank you for the words of encouragement! God bless you...

    • mothersofnations profile imageAUTHOR

      Mothers of Nations 

      3 years ago

      Jan Shares, thank you for your kind words and the vote up! I truly appreciate it. God bless you...

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      Genna East 

      3 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      I agree with Eric. You have made tender yearning seem subtly nuanced and beautiful! This is such a lovely poem. :-)

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      Diana L Pierce 

      3 years ago from Potter County, Pa.

      Love it. Selective word choices make for great expression. There is no need for anything longer. Voted up.

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      SAQIB 

      3 years ago from HYDERABAD PAKISTAN

      Very enjoyable. Loved it. Keep Up!! MothersofNations

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      Janis Leslie Evans 

      3 years ago from Washington, DC

      Love the emotion and longing expressed in your poem. Nicely executed, voted up and beautiful.

    • mothersofnations profile imageAUTHOR

      Mothers of Nations 

      3 years ago

      Monia Saad, thank you for your kind words. (For me, the song hit home...) Thank you, love, God bless you...

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      monia ben saad 

      3 years ago from In my Dream

      like this poem with the music in vedeo

      awesome

    • mothersofnations profile imageAUTHOR

      Mothers of Nations 

      3 years ago

      Word55, thank you kindly for taking the time to stop by, read and comment. It's always nice to see a new visitor and your words are very kind, certainly serving as an encouragement to continue* Thank you. God bless you...

    • mothersofnations profile imageAUTHOR

      Mothers of Nations 

      3 years ago

      Faith Reaper, God bless you sister. You words are very kind and encouraging - very much appreciated. Thank you kindly for finding this share-worthy! God bless you...

    • mothersofnations profile imageAUTHOR

      Mothers of Nations 

      3 years ago

      EricDierker, thank you so much for saying that. Means a lot to me to hear it had a positive effect on you. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem! God bless you...

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      Word 

      3 years ago from Chicago

      I like this. I love the rhythm and rhyme. You have a wonderful flow of words with sincere meaning motherofnations. I hope to read many more.

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      Faith Reaper 

      3 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, such beautifully expressed words, so passionate! I love it.

      You are a brilliant poet.

      Up +++ tweeting, pinning, G+ and sharing

      God bless you

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      Eric Dierker 

      3 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Truly beautiful and somehow made yearning, darn near attractive. This gave off a good feeling.

    • mothersofnations profile imageAUTHOR

      Mothers of Nations 

      3 years ago

      CrisSp, thank you kindly for taking the time to stop by, read and comment. Thank you for appreciating the poem! God bless you...

    • mothersofnations profile imageAUTHOR

      Mothers of Nations 

      3 years ago

      BillyBuc, I'm so grateful to see you my way and even more grateful that you've enjoyed the poem. You're opinion is valuable to me, coming from such a wonderful writer! Thank you again. God bless you...

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      CrisSp 

      3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Lovely write...I can sense the yearning.

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      Bill Holland 

      3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Any poem that begins with a simile and a metaphor in the first stanza is a fine poem in my opinion. Great images here....wonderful passion from a passionate writer. Well done my friend.

      blessings always

      bill

    • mothersofnations profile imageAUTHOR

      Mothers of Nations 

      3 years ago

      Jo Harley, thank you kindly for visiting. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem!

      God bless you...

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      Joleen Friesen 

      3 years ago from Alberta Canada

      beautiful!

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