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Wonderful Thoughts (A Poem)

Updated on March 14, 2013
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4.8 out of 5 stars from 4 ratings of Wonderful Thoughts (A Poem)

Love Love Love

was it meant for me ?

how did this come about?

how did this come to be ?

your touch your kiss

the twinkle in your eyes

the laughter the fun

no wonder feelings never die

you speak of truth and what is real

expressing your emotions and how you really feel

but I've been hurt before I don't know which way to go

I hope this isn't a mirage just let me really know

is this your honesty is everything true

do you feel and think the same as I do

so yes I'll try to let go of the past and to move forth

thinking this is a new path a different course

you aren't here to trick me or to belittle me at all

you will always be there to catch when I fall

i promise to be there for you when I can

to hold your heart to always stand

by your side and to remain true

to always make sure that you know that I love you too

Here below are a few links to a couple of other poems that I've wrote:

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      Pete 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Nice one! Trust and honesty are so, so important in a relationship...

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      Faythe F. 4 years ago from USA

      voted up very nice

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      B A Tobin 4 years ago from Connnecticut

      Beautifully written..the "tango" of the beginnings of a real relationship.

      Thanks for the lovely writing!

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @barbat79 thanks i really do appreciate the feedback

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @faythef thanks for liking my poem and voting up

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @petenali i couldn't have agreed more thanks for your feedback

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      Susan Britton 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Torrilyn maybe you have found the one in a million. Let's hope so. Great heartfelt poem.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @suzzycue thank you and i think that I have.

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      Insightful Tiger 4 years ago

      Loved the poem and can how it is relatable to what many people feel.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @InsightfulTiger Im glad you liked my poem thanks for reading

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Love must be nurtured and cherishes and it's important to always let the other person know how we feel. Enjoyed.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @Rose Im happy you enjoyed my poem

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      So very well done. It explains your emotions so well.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @aviannovice thanks Im glad you were able to see the deeper meaning behind my poem

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      Rayne123 4 years ago

      Beautiful poem

      I am guessing this is dedicated to someone you love/loved.

      Beautiful words

      Laurie

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @Laurie

      it is dedicated to someone I

      use to care about and Im glad you found

      My poem beautiful

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      Hello Miss Torri of Terrific - and these are wondeful (poetic) thoughts because you made them 'wonderfully' so with your beautiful heart and lovely mind. Sending warm wishes and good energy for such an awesome and eclectic variety of hub subjects to choose from - and hubbravo from the epi-man/aka Colin at lake erie time ontario canada 12:33am

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      B A Tobin 4 years ago from Connnecticut

      So lovely! So lovely it brings my heart out and reminds me of my own love. Thank you

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @barbat79 thanks for the positive feedback and Im glad that it reminded you of your own love.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @epigramman oh how wonderful you are to comment on my poem and to give me such positive energy and well wishes. I truly do appreciate you taking the time to comment.

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      Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Beautiful poetry Torri. I enjoyed this and found it inspiring for me to write poems again. Voting up and rating awesome, interesting, and beautiful :)

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @OldeCashmere thanks for the positive feedback and Im glad that you liked my poem and that it was an inspiration for you.

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