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Words (poem)

Updated on January 31, 2015

He bared the words which set her heart to flight

Each passage was another dream come true

Enchantment was the picture which he drew

And wonder were the feelings he’d ignite

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He spoke of heavens he would bear her to

Each wished for whisper sparked her soul’s delight

Each promise from his lips her whims excite

And then he freed the words of I love you

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They spent their days with words of wonderment

The world she knew seemed very far away

She found her meaning in his verse there sent

Forever were the words she heard him say

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And then one dawn such pain would she incur

For in the end mere words were all they were

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      Beth37 4 years ago

      I think that's my favorite of all your writings I've read so far.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Great poem Hatter.. !

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      This is beautiful, and so touching! Great job, MH..... Voting up and awesome.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      quiet beautiful poem that you have here

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      quite*

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      Anna Haven 4 years ago from Scotland

      'For in the end mere words were all they were,' great line. I thought I was reading a love story till reality bite at the end. Nicely done.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      So much meaning with such strong words

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      Jennifer Stone 4 years ago from the Riverbank, England

      This is a beautiful poem, I love it! Votes and all sorts coming your way, all the best, Jen

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      Chris Mills 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO until the end of June, 2017

      The Equation of Love: Eloquence - Essence = Defeasance

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Very good writing, I enjoyed reading your poem.Thanks!

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      Suzette Walker 4 years ago from Taos, NM

      Beautiful poem. We have all been there - hearing the beautiful words and then learning the words were just that -words with no feeling or commitment behind them. You certainly can capture emotions beautifully in your poetry and the accompanying photos are so wonderful also. I really enjoyed reading this one!

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Those words should never be spoken without the heart to back them up!

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      Martin, your list of literary genres know no bounds.

      You are a master of the art of writing.

      Your understanding of the dynamics of a relationship is uncanny.

      I tip my hat to you, M. Hatter, sir.

      DJ.

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      jbshaban 4 years ago from California

      That was beautiful. So touching. She must have been a poet at heart to put such faith in words.

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      breakfastpop 4 years ago

      Your words are powerful, sad and awesome.

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Mhatter99..Ahhh..words..so many words said..YET..so few are said and used properly...words without showing the true meaning are just that..WORDS...Seems to be a trend these days...Beautifully written...

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Words are all we have to express our feelings and the must come from the heart.

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Words are s0 powerful. Some use them so meaninglessly. Good thoughts on this one.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      This was so well done, Martin, and so true sometimes.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Beautiful words when put into action are most meaningful and effective.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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