Write Her a Line
She posts pictures ..
of a lonely heart
searching the vast internet
for the other part
Who will send her a thought...
or a single phrase
just for her soul..
or her spirit... to raise
Write her a line ..
with words so soft,
of laying with her...
in a solitary loft
Wipe a tear...
from her crying eyes,
tell her you are there
for she...is the prize
Hold her close...
kiss her cheek
words are not needed
you don't have... to speak
She will know..
although far... you may be..
that it is only her
in your dreams .. that you see
Michael Montoya ...2013
Comments
Great poetry cleaner3.
Dearest Michael,
This is so very tender and sweet. Lovely beyond words! Really been loving even your titles to your poems, as they are just perfect, coupled with such dramatic, yet endearing imagery (really love that last image there).
You are a true poet, and boy don't I know it : ) and you should too! Well, I pray that you know you have a great gift and you continue to write poetry of such excellence here to share with all.
Voted up ++++ and sharing
Hugs and love, Faith Reaper
So incredibly beautiful and romantic. Voted Up and Beautiful!
Best Always,
Kim
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jabelufiroz... thank you for your visit and the comment
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Faith.. .the pure water that flows... from the top of the mountain... the sweet flower.. that grows in the lowly meadow... the white dove that flies across the blue sky. There are but a few women that have your great personality and charm. Thank You for the support of poetry and my own words.. I have tried taking a more positive tone in my poetry .. for the pain has been released. (Thank God). Thank you for prompting me to write more poems and share them .. I had become greedy with my poetry, wanting to keep them (along with the painful expression) within my hurt locker.
Love and great hugs
Michael
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ocfireflies.. thank you for the comment and the visit .. i only follow hubbers who leace comments, so now I follow you after reading some of your great work.
cleaner3,
Consider yourself followed as well. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Best Always,
Kim
This is good, I hadn't even gotten notice, just came across it and hooked from the beginning! ^
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Thank You Jackie.. you are making me blush..
Sometimes words are not necessary. Although your were very satisfying. Great work!
A tenderly painted portrait. thank you
Dearest Michael,
Well now when one writes a comment beginning with such lovely poetry, you know you are in the presence of a true poet, who is not able to not write such wonderful sentiments. I am humbled by your comment back to me. Thank you so much for sharing here and my heart is so thrilled to know you are released from your pain.
I am praising Him this night!
God bless you dear heart. In His Love, Faith Reaper
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@ Wayne ..thank you for the visit.. looking forward to your next work ..
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Mhatter .thanks for the comment ..
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Faith .. thank You ..
Hi Dearest Michael,
I hope you are truly released from your pain, as I saw a comment you made on another hub about you being in pain, so just wanted to check if you are doing well and healing.
God bless, Faith Reaper
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Faith .. thank you for your worry about me, I have experienced a release of the mind .. a certain reflection that swept over me ..to allow myself to step back and not be swallowed by the depression of a broken heart, but to write from a different tone and still express the feelings and emotions of what i feel...without letting it bring me down.
When that feeling comes over me I think of my Lord.. who loves me completly .. just as the summer flower loves the breeze.. it may blow her and bend her ..but the freshness of air inbetween it's petals gives the sweet flower the comfort of softness only felt by those who allow the Lord to hold their heart safe.
Thanks for your concern... my beautiful friend.
Michael
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