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Writers Surprise

Updated on June 1, 2010



The flesh eating words are being written

As we read.

And it’s those cold fingers that keep it going

Here we can do without the warm sun

There we can not go one day without the

Grip of our shiny little pen’s of sympathy.

It’s pretty it’s like a dying flower blooming

And a bloody army singing viciously

But their uniforms need pressed.

Do you have your hateful iron honey?

Do you have time to put on that black dress?

Are we ready to go?

It reminds of times of to much wine

Causing begging to mumble strongly

O how do we drink through the ear?


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      Sa`ge 7 years ago from Barefoot Island

      sometimes me think its all noise, just noise! then, the mist clears and I can use my eyes to drink the sight of what my ears do drink, at times to avoid, at times to not be annoyed. Is worth the time given to think? Or is it taken? Then I notice my portal is waiting! I love visiting your portal. ~aloha nui~

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      kimberlyslyrics 7 years ago

      I love you and your words since day one

      your biggest fan


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      Entwinds 7 years ago

      I come back and read more and more everyday your so inspiring I will say.. The words leak from you like music flows through my veins. Its an imprisonment of luxury to read what you say at least it is to me thats all I can say..

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      Entwinds 7 years ago

      Love it

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      epigramman 7 years ago

      excellent poetic imagery from the man who invented the language!!!

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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      "O how do we drink through the ear?" Sounds like a drinking problem! Thank you Awful Poet!

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      lalesu 7 years ago from south of the Mason-Dixon

      Ahh, yes, sometimes we must write, mustn't we. Even on beautiful sunny days or when friends call, it just has to be finished first.

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      Joy56 7 years ago

      that again was truly thought provoking, thankyou