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Carpe Diem

Updated on October 19, 2014



You allow me to dwell in your place of pleasure

and I express my deepest appreciation.

As far as it can reach,

you gasp at the thickness.

Anticipating penetration as it happened,

clenching your teeth.

With the rhythm of a blacksmith,

I strike

between your legs dipped in lace,

fastened tightly around my waist

to encourage my action.

We are poetry in motion,

bursting with passion.

Seizing the moment,

soaked in satisfaction.








Copyright © 2011 Daunt'e Loper

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      Nellieanna Hay 6 years ago from TEXAS

      Well, what can I say? It's hot! OK, I can say more. It is quite beautifully presented.

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      LOL, thank you Nellieanna

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      valeriebelew 6 years ago from Metro Atlanta, GA, USA

      Erotica. That's one hot intense lyric. (:v

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thanks Valerie

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      jessica.written. 6 years ago from Flagstaff, Arizona

      thoroughly enjoyed this.

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thank you jessica,I'm glad you did

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      Gyspy Writer 6 years ago from Midwest

      Whew! Excellent! What imagery. You have a way with words, my friend!

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thanks Gyspy Writer;)

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      Cheri Taylor 6 years ago from New York, NY

      this is very very smooth.. and I truly enjoyed it.. Thanks much for sharing this erotica..

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thank you Heart Felt, I enjoyed writing it;)

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      Beverly 6 years ago from Philadelphia

      love this great poem.

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      kikkibabe 6 years ago

      Voted up =).Great hub.x

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thank you Kikki and Beberlee;)

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      Norma Budden 5 years ago from Nunavut, Canada

      I don't suppose there is a subject you don't write about, is there? :) I am taking all kinds of journeys as I travel through your hubs today. I must say that, in each piece you write, you do have a way with words.

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      Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      LOL, thank you Norma. I really appreciate all of the comments and support you have given me.

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