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Written in the Stars Poem

Updated on November 15, 2011
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Staring out into the night

Trying to hide the pain

The feel of being unwanted, unloved and uncared for

That which is greater that hunger


Wishing to know what love is

But it seems to come with much pain


The miles are getting longer,

The closer I get to you

Know that I try to tell you I need you

I know this love seems real

But I don’t know how to feel


I wish to know what love is

But it seems to come with much pain


Everybody wants to look in the mirror

And feel a little better

Everybody wants to tell someone their secrets

So why don't you tell me

The space between my fingers fit yours


I wish to know what love is

But it seems to come with much pain

That which fills my silent tears with pride.


By Richie

This poem is about searching for love but not with all your heart due t the pain that it sometimes comes with....Nonetheless once you found your love you know its the best feeling in the world...

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      snakeslane 5 years ago from Canada

      Hello richbrayan, I see you've touched on a universal theme here, unrequited love, or maybe just love. Love is such a mystery. It is well worth the effort to explore. Nice to read your best... Regards, snakeslane

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      richbrayan 5 years ago from London, United Kingdom

      Thanks V Qisya I'm very glad that you liked this piece. It makes me proud to know I've got someone who appreciates my poetry :)

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      V Qisya 5 years ago

      Wow, Richie. You're simply amazing! This is the 2nd poem I've read. I could feel the flow as if I was there. Such a great piece. Keep writing, poet :D

      Awesome. Up and away!

      Best Wishes, Verita

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      richbrayan 5 years ago from London, United Kingdom

      Thank you very much for reading my poem :)

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Lovely poem. Love does come with pain no getting away from that.