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You : A Poem

Updated on July 7, 2017


Always in my mind; the thoughts about you

Meet my day with thousands of dreams; it is always about you

Love flying through the air to meet my soul; wrapped around my being

Despair and hope catapulted into the highest heaven; wish for your coming


It’s not been too long since our road has met

Fate made me walk around the life and kept waiting someone to be with

Then when you showed in the other side of my world; I was frozen on my feet

In my entire dream was never anyone as beautiful as you become someone who I will let to be my lead


Now, your presence is like a song from heaven for me

Your beauty runs through the whole part of my life

Leaving trace in every step I take; calling me, breath into me

Even sometimes its feels like being cut so deep by a knife


Preparing my heart to be together with you; is a beauty in this pain of long wait

Which I will keep later in the future; as wonderful gift from memories of you

Right now I will cherish every present of your being and anything I am able to relate

Knowing you are existed, knowing you are alive, knowing it is you


You….

Only you.

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    Audrey Kirchner 7 years ago from Central Oregon

    Lovely! Thanks for writing such a beautiful poem and sharing it with us.

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    Nell Rose 7 years ago from England

    Hi, Freya, sorry I haven't been over, I hope you are well? lovely poem, so much meaning. cheers nell

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    saddlerider1 7 years ago

    A poem from the heart, leaves the reader with deep thoughts of love. So fragile yet so poignant, love is fleeting capture and harness it and never let it escape your soul. Lovely read, much enjoyed by me.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Akirchner, thank you for reading this. The pleasure is mine.:)

    Nell, It's ok, Nell. Glad to have you back. Once again, happy birthday! Hope your toe and ear are good now! :)

    Saddlerider1, ah, thank you for you thoughtful comment. I really like it. This is what I feel at this moment which indeed making me fragile and so open to get hurt, but I can't able to run from it. I believe in love there is no such thing as keep it or leave it, because if you don't want it and leave, love will stay still, and eat you from inside. So, why bother? Thank you, Sir. :)

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    sord87 7 years ago

    I really have no words to describe or comment on this but as you pointing to anyone who is YOU then i would say- I love You too!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hehehe... I appreciate that you still leave comment even you don't know what to say. :) Thank you. ^^

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    Joy56 7 years ago

    interesting, and touching thanks

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, Joy. Thanks. This poem was made in my mother language at first so maybe in my will to converted it, I messed this up :(. I hope this is not too awful to read. ;D

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    Mentalist acer 7 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

    Another elegant and poniente piece from the heart...amazing poem Freya:)!!

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    I'm glad you found your love!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Mentalist Acer. That really flattering comment. ^^ Thank you.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Micky, I have to thanks Hub Pages for that! :p

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    Jacob Darkley 7 years ago from California, USA

    Thank you for sharing this. It makes me miss someone though :(.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ouch! It is ok missing someone, Jacob. It's mean you are still alive and know what love is. :)

    Thank you for reading this.

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    Nell Rose 7 years ago from England

    Hi, Freya, much better now! but I did just bash my arm against the microwave! it's got a lovely bruise! lol oh well at least my ear is better! cheers nell

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ah, Nell! So you got another birthday present from microwave? I really not envy you, dear! Trust me! LOL.

    Have a nice day, dear.

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    Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

    You're in love, stay in it no matter what. :)

    That's so touching, Freya

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Yes, I am. ^^ I'm trying, Blaise. Always.

    Thank you, dear. :)

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    epigramman 7 years ago

    ..and only YOU could write something as lovely, deeply poetic and soul searching as these words which caress me.

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    rasenstars1 7 years ago

    The poem was very loving, and lovely. Thank you for sharing

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Epigramman, You are so nice! That's really flaterring words and my head getting big now. Hehehe... Thank you, Sir.

    Hi, Rasenstars1, I hope you enjoy it. Thank you for reading this. ^^

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    Entwinds 7 years ago

    Beautiful

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Entwinds, thank you. ^^

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    lookatme2010 7 years ago

    ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL!

    i love your poem...

    thank you so much for creating such a poetic masterpiece of yours....

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, Lookatme2010. Thank you very much. That's really sweet of you and make me so happy. \^o^/

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    Kennedy Yakas 7 years ago

    ... Oh my, this poem touched me ever so. It's a brilliant piece of poetry, and it's something that really makes you think! I absolutely LOVED it!! Thank you ever so much for writing this and sharing it with everyone! I hope that you will publish more in the time to come!!

    -Kennedy

    P.S.- I would love it if you would check out some of my poems also!! c:

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    KennedyYakas, thank you for your thoughtful comments. If it is God's will, He will give me more inspiration to write, so I will keep writing. ^_^

    I will visit you soon. Thanks.

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    Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon

    Freya this is breath-taking Amazingly beautiful unique and truly stupendous. You always write great poetry which always leaves a unique effect on my soul and day :D

    WOW~~~~~~!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Uriel, you are soooo sweeeeeet! I am glad you like it. I hope I really able to touch you with my style. both of us have really different style. I doubt I will able to write dark poetry like you did almost all the time. really amazing poetries you have there!

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    ACSutliff 6 years ago

    This is a beautiful account of what it feels like to fall in love. Well done, Freya.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, ACSutliff. I am so happy you like it. :)

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    kathryn1000 6 years ago from London

    That is wonderful.I have never met someone from Borneo Island though I did teach some students from Brunei once,many years ago

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, Kathryn1000. Well, Indonesian are similar with Brunei Darussalam people. We are all malay race. :)

    That is the great things about internet because we can meet people from everywhere in the world. Thank you, Kathrin. :)

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    Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

    leaving trace in every step I take

    Cuts like knife.. Beautiful..

    The beauty of love sometimes is pain..

    That moment why your hearts beats together as one

    When you fear that you might faint

    When missing him makes you cry....

    You you are scared to death that you might love him.

    When he takes your breath away...

    I love the story it entails..

    Love's journey is not in vain..

    It's tough.. But love conquers all

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Capedium, that's beautiful. thank you. ^^

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