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You Not Ready to Let Her Go

Updated on July 5, 2017

You not ready to let her go

Missing her essence

Dreaming of her presence

Wondering when her absent


You not ready to let her go

Wishing for hope

Craving for her love

Fluttering when she become soft


Smile for her voice in your ear

Fly for her words in your heart

Curved the emptiness for while

Thinking that you have something there


Trapping yourself inside blackthorn

Holding what already gone

Cannot move, but barely hard to stay

Lost your breathe along the way


You told me;

You not ready to let her go

For what purpose?

For what purposeā€¦


Please turn the light off

I need to sleep now


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  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Yes, it is hard, but somehow the pain is worthy for me to make me grow more and more inside. Thank you, Pinkhawk. Nice to meet you. ^_^

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    pinkhawk 

    8 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

    ...i remember a story of a friend and I know how hard it is for her. Thank you for sharing this heart crashing but a wonderful poem... :)

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    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ah, Thank you, Nell. I'm so glad you like it. ^_^

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    Nell Rose 

    8 years ago from England

    Hi, Freya, what can I say? another moving story in a poem. great, loved it. cheers nell

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    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Indeed, it is my way to be grateful; turned sadness into beautiful reading, will turned pain into something useful. I gain two benefit in it,

    (1) I got my catharsis, and

    (2) I created something good.

    And every time I look at those poems again, remembering the pain when I made them, and reading others reacted on it, I will feel grateful, because my pain is still beautiful.

    it is Allah who made me can took benefit on this pain, and I should feel grateful. help me away from stress.

    Insha Allah, dear. I'll try my best to be patient. I'll try my best. Because I seek Allah's love in His promised, that is why I understand that I should be more patient. Sad indeed flooded my heart sometimes, but I know how to handle it. Don't worry. Take your time. ^_^

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    Mr. Story Teller 

    8 years ago from United stated

    Some times your poetry is very sad to me. Though it is still very beautiful. As you told me once, poetry makes such terrible situations seem so beautiful in these words. Maybe one day soon she will flood this heart no more but you must be patient. I am sure the wait will be worth it, if it is the will of Allah.

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    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Very true. Life is so intriguing indeed. You put it in the right word. Thank you, Moulik. ^_^

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    Moulik Mistry 

    8 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

    Life is so intriguing that sometimes we get confused - very beautiful poem...

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    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    But I'm so sleepy, Micky. Hoaheeem! Nighty night. Thank you for visiting me. Come again tomorrow morning to tell me more story about that lady in nude, ok?

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    Micky Dee 

    8 years ago

    Don't go to sleep Freya!!! Freya!!! Dagnab it! She's asleep.

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Life happen while we wait indeed, Dohn! Should be really careful. ^_~

    Thank you, Dohn. I always happy to hear from you.

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    dohn121 

    8 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

    The road to recovery can be a long one. There is no set time. Wonderful work, Freya. Life happens while we wait :D

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    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    So, I should wait for you, Pintails? hmmmm.... Hahaha ^_^ Insha Allah, maybe I will. :p

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    pintails7886 

    8 years ago from Memphis TN

    When the time is right you will be the first to know ;) And I'll bet anything it wont take as long as you think, and inshaa ALlah I will be worth the wait.

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