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Yet breathing – the poem

Updated on October 24, 2013
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Deadening end of a tunnel so dark

Winding thoughts of mind lark

Yet breathing ….

Why not it stops to kill the reeling

Shadows of ghosts do jerk

The numbness so much seething!!!!

Claret drops of emotion flow

Fluid were the visions row

Yet breathing….

Why not it ropes in the kneeling

Credos of moist do mark

The crumbles of emotions pining!!!!

Together we used to romance history

Lonely is the present mystery

Deadening is the channel of heart

Winding is the kernel of mind

Lost is time

Frost is life

Yet breathing….

Death so much more been waited

And when this night will end…

And how far is the path to mend…..

A vacuum so much filled with sighs…

Unsaid were the words ….

Frozen among the crystals of pain…

And yet breathing……!!!!!!

Each breath and its taking my life away….!!!

Each breath and still life is living….

How far and how long….

Why griping senses of nonsense mind yet breathing….

Losing the sense of death…to life

It’s a burden to breathe…

And a burden to live…

Eyes are an aching arc….

Destination death…how far and how long?

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Wow, very dramatic and profound as to that slow suffering, we sometimes call life and wondering how much longer we can hang on.

      Up and more and sharing

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Beautifully written with a simple meaning of life and the photos are well attached to this title

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      kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Always so beautiful poetry, Deergha! It's a sad poem and you illustrated very well with some of the pictures in black and white! Very well done!

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      Great poem, intense and vivid. Voted up.

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Faith Reaper

      DDE

      kidscraft

      Vellur

      Many thanks to all of you for your continuous support and inspiration. It means a lot to me. Many smiles all your ways

      take care and hope you all enjoy your days ahead

      deergha

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      Martin Kloess 3 years ago from San Francisco

      Wow! Is this still you? Motivated, were we? thank you

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Still me yeah......and thank you for your words here :-)

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      The Stages Of ME 3 years ago

      This is deep and thoughtful and almost desparate and very beautiful

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @The Stages of ME....for your comment here. Take care and God bless you

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      A wonderful read and thank you so much dghbrh for sharing this gem.

      Here's to so many more to come.

      Eddy.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Thanks for the fascinating journey.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Sometimes life is synonymous with death...

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      Powerful poem. Thank you for sharing. Jamie

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Eddy

      Gypsy

      Deb

      jhamann

      Many thanks for your kind and inspiring words here. They mean a lot to me....God bless you all:-)

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