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You Are More To Me

Updated on September 15, 2011


If you can read my heart, then you’ll surely see
That everything you read , talks about everything you meant to me
You are my hero, who let me stand strong like tree
And when I fall, you held me up off my knee…

When the rain leaks through, you were my umbrella
When my world was getting dark…you were the flashlight to my heart
When thunder creeps in, you were the one who help it end

When the drums play my sky with a screeching sound of flute wind
Lighting flash my mind and the pouring rain flood my eyes
Happiness subside, hope drifted afar, and left in dark…
But you brought a light with a touch of your warming heart…

If I can scribble the sky, with your name followed with love…
I’ll surely will do it but I felt that it’s not enough
Even millions of words cannot express all
My deepest thought of you….
Is deeper than sea
Because you are more than anything to me…

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      Shaisty-Chase-Tea 5 years ago from The Outskirts

      I voted you up a notch on the hubpage system of systematic hierachtical democracy because my ego thinks your poeticlly dashing after one stanza, like cody rhodes because i love pretty words... but i must ask, having just read the first stanza, why do you rhyme see, me, tree, and knee?... I would have ryhmed envy, embody, a glass of henissee, "...up..." like Boys 2 Men singing down on bended knee... don't cheat a rybm scheme by not thinking about us smart people that read poetry too...

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      nasseralabdali 5 years ago from Saudi Arabia

      full of passion and heart-touching! voted up and awesome.

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      nisa 5 years ago

      @Shaisty, how did you see my best friend cheating? Because she write from what comes from her heart, you considered it cheating? Everyone has different style of writing and please respect that! Don't call someone a cheater if you don't want to be called a cheater! "Smart" readers doesn't exist, only "passionate" reader!

      @Chan, just keep writing! I love your poetry the way it is! Very passionate!

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      satice_j 5 years ago from via the Bronx, NY

      I will say 'but beautiful are your words!' I take the simple words and the flagrant ones, its all the same to me. I love poetry and I'm glad I got to read yours! Keep writing and sharing!

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Shaisty, nasser, nisa and satice, thanks. @shaisty, If you feel that I write poetry and did not think of the "smart" reader, then go find smart 'writer'! It's simple you know! Just an honest advice! Cheers!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I always enjoy your poetry Chanroth. You write from the heart.......

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Ruby, I always enjoy reading your comment! Thank you! :)

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