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You Became The Man

Updated on February 28, 2012

I was stunned by how desperate your love-making was

My eyes remained dilated

Even as the sun revealed everything I ever forgot

But now we have a problem
I can see right through you
You showed me too much
Can we do it again?
I just want to be sure

Because things just don’t seem the same
You blew my mind out in a way that I never contemplated

It wasn’t pornographic
Because I know what that's about
I just don’t get how kind you are with children
And my mother

But you aroused yourself to such a frenzy
That in your haste you became me and I became you

You attacked
All inhibition was drowned in a pool on the sheets
You played to a camera that wasn’t there
You destroyed all past lovers
And any chance that you could ever be truly honest with any man

Except me
But I get the feeling you’re not too worried about that


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      Mark Lecuona 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @Deborah - Thank you! I like all caps! Ha.

      @Eiddwen - Thank you again! I appreciate it...

      @raciniwa - Thank you too! I appreciate what you say.

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      raciniwa 6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu blow me away with this Suburban...

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      Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

      Great words and I award my up up and away!!!

      Have a great day.


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      Deborah Brooks Langford 6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      WOW...WHAT A POEM.. awesome

      I voted way up