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You Can't Make Me Leave

Updated on July 11, 2012

Five More Minutes

I love it too much

I don't want to go

You have been in there long enough

Get in do your business, get out

Those words have rung in my head for a little over four decades

As I let the water pour over my face and shoulders

I can feel every muscle in my body go limp

My eyes shut but so relaxed as if they were turned off

Not a care in the world

Until of course the water stops

Out of the shower I go with a breeze that is more like a chill

Erasing each wonderful and exciting exhilarating moment

There are very few places I would say would be almost as good as sex

This is one

All my emotions come to a head

My mind now clear of any wrong doing

My body clean of all the hard labor and strenuous effort that left its temporarily mark

To feel the rush that tingles and pumps my blood through every vein

As the water goes to a trickle then to drip slowly I get out

Reluctantly leaving the high point of my day

Only waiting till my return one that will be forever learned


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    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      6 years ago

      raciniwa I like to think we don't miss out on anything in life.We are where we want to be at this very moment.We can be in so many places but only in one place at a time.Enjoy your time reading and when the time is right you will come back and do other things that make you happy.You will bring with you new thoughts and new ideas and share them with everyone you meet.You will make the world a better place by teaching others what you know.I am excited to see you and I am very happy to see you do all the things that bring you the greatest joys in life.Thanx so much have a beautiful day.

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      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu reading this refreshes me...miss reading your writings my friend...i'll answer your letter later...just saw it earlier...uh, much i miss in life nowadays...i am so focused on my reading...

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      6 years ago

      Dim Flaxenwick You have a way of triggering my thoughts so I can move on.I feel like I am at a carnaval and I get to shoot a gun at a star and play as long as I want.Even though truth is when I was young I never got to play and I alsways walked away thinking someday I will play.We all have our life to live but sometimes we have so much to give and there seems like nobody there to enjoy what we have to offer.Then other times we are like colored chalk and everyone who sees us wants to pick us up and draw and color on the sidewalk anything that their imagination can think up .Thanx again.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 

      6 years ago from Great Britain

      Bless you. You give me too much credit. Thank you, so much for always cheering me up.

      I hope you have a wonderful day.

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      6 years ago

      Dim Flaxenwick I woke up dragging my feet and wondering what I can do now to kick my body into high gear.With no comments or no thoughts of a new writing I was like hot water boiling.No sign of getting hot no steam no change.Just to early to tell I guess.Then I went back on the HubPages and I found not one but three of your comments.Now I perked up like a dog with my ears going up when they hear a noise.You have done it again.Now I would be wagging my tail and jumping back and forth.Off to a good start and thanx to a friend who is there. Have a great day and feel free to move with all your enthusiasm and creativity.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 

      6 years ago from Great Britain

      No one else could possibly have written a hub about taking a shower, so interesting and funny.

      You´ve made my day........ again.

      Thank you. x

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      6 years ago

      kj force My own little santuary.I talk to myself and sing to myself.Very fulfilled and satisfied.I am glad you enjoyed it.I have a friend who takes like three showers a day.That's a ittle too much even for me.

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      6 years ago from Florida

      DREAM ON...OMG..erotica shower ? Loved your words...I too linger there ..nothing like it to wake you up..or calm you down...very well written and great word choices...


    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      6 years ago

      picklesandrufus It's shower time again.What a wonderful way to end a day.After out in the yard mowing the grass and now I can relax at last.Thanx so much for reading.

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      6 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      I totally the time in my shower as the water rinses the tensions away from my weary body....ahhhhh.

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      6 years ago

      Deborah Brooks How nice is that.I am going in for another shower.You made me extra happy just when I needed a little pick me up.I love the water so hot the bathroom looks like a sauna when I am finished.My father would say through the door in a stern voice" Are You done ?"We only had one bathroom in the house he either had to go or he didn't want me wasting water get clean and get out.(Old school)

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      wow awesome and beautiful.. and such reality...Your words had be from the first.. Bravo.. I can feel your words wash over me..




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