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You Caught My Attention

Updated on November 19, 2013

I Feel The Mist

Once involved in my work

Head down and fingers tapping

No breath forgotten

Here goes as I drag my thoughts out in the open

To bare all

A changed world

Taking in too much water

Like a boat with a leak sinking fast

There is no turning back

Embracing uncertainty of every moment

Not knowing what to expect

Opening up to freedom

That is what life is all about

Living on the edge

Riding a wave waiting for it to break

There will never be another time like it

it is far more than I expected

Then again life always is

Nothing steady or safe

A gamble worth every risk


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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      Gypsy Rose Lee Getting started can be hard but once progress is made you can continue with pride.Joy 56 Keep trying and know in whatever the result it is always better than doing nothing.Thank you both for reading and giving me more thoughts to express.

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      Joy56 4 years ago

      onward and upward, onward and upward...... it is the only way

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lots of challenges can be risky but also worth a try

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      DDE Life can be scary and it is easy to take the easy way out and avoid risks and chances. In time you will miss out on the great opportunities and the pleasure of untouched happiness. Thank you for reading and sharing.As we gain confidence in our actions the next challenge can become easier.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      You Caught My Attention a challenge can be risky and sometimes taking chances is worth the risk. Life is about experiences and about how much you can take from life itself. Great thoughts here you always leave me with something more to think about.

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      annart To welcome the variety of every situation. Looking deeper into any problem and find the underlying meaning. Finding the time to encourage instead of being discouraged. With the odds against me. Finding a loop hole and making it work. Writing with passion and power. To unleash new glory and humor. An unbeatable combination that will serve me well. I am trying to free my mind of past negative thoughts that hold me back and bring me down. It takes time and practice I learn as I go. Thank you for reading and adding to the excitement. Where I go from here is not clear. All my effort is given to one project at a time. The weekend is close let the games begin.

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      Ann Carr 4 years ago from SW England

      Certainly is a gamble worth the risk. This gives a feeling of adventure, daring and great anticipation! Love it. Ann