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Poem on Loneliness

Updated on December 9, 2010

Lonely in woods

The place where once you parted with me

The place where once you parted with me,

I am still standing there with hands stretched.

Ages have been passed but you never looked back.

You promised me you will return one day;

You promised me you will be back by spring.

Springs have been passed:

Of youth, of love, of life too.

I am no more a spring flower now,

But I am still here waiting for you.

I didn’t stir,

My eyes never closed,

The pupil of my eyes is fixed on the spot,

From where you once gone leaving me alone.

You fired the flame in my little heart,

I never allowed the flame to die,

But the flame so kindled that I am now ashes.

Between the ashes and woods of pine-

The place where once you left me alone-

Come and blow my ashes away,

So I can be free forever now.

Read my other poems on 

An Ordinary Summer Evening

Summer Breeze

I am so Fortunate

Good-bye to You

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    • gulnazahmad profile image
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      gulnazahmad 6 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks Noorenaz hope to come and see your hubs soon:-)

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      gulnazahmad 7 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks Freya:-)

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      Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      Sooo deep. Well done, dear. Love it! :)

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      NEHRA 7 years ago from MAURITUS

      lovely..

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      noorin 7 years ago from Canada

      Very true ...

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      gulnazahmad 7 years ago from Pakistan

      Thanks noorin i love to write especially poetry because poetry is the best form of expression.

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      noorin 7 years ago from Canada

      Nice one, didn't know u write poetry ... I on the other hand, stopped writing poetry long time ago but I still enjoy reading art =) Rated it up.